ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE P3
FEBRUARY/MARCH 2016
MEMORANDUM
NATIONAL SENIOR CERTIFICATE
GRADE 12

INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
This memorandum must be used together with the attached English FAL assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.
SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1
1.1 On the other side of the door ...

  • Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective essay
  • The following must be considered:
    • If narrative, a strong story line must be evident. There must be a logical sequence of tense.
    • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an experience/ incident.
    • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and feelings/emotions about what happened on the other side of the door.
    • A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
      NOTE: The words given in the topic MUST be included somewhere in
      the essay. [50]

1.2The sound of nature

  • Descriptive/Narrative//Reflective essay
  • The following must be considered:
    • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an experience/ incident.
    • If narrative, a strong story line must be evident in which a series of events leads to an outcome. There must be a logical sequence of tense.
    • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and feelings/emotions.
    • A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.[50]

1.3 My culture has shaped me.

  • Reflective/Descriptive /Narrative essay
  • The following must be considered:
    • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and feelings/emotions surrounding the impact of culture on the candidate.
    • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of how culture has influenced the candidate.
    • If narrative, a strong story line must be evident. There must be a logical sequence of tense.
    • A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]

1.4 Rights and responsibilities cannot be separated. Discuss this statement.

  • Discursive/Reflective/Narrative essay
  • The following must be considered:
    • If discursive, the essay must offer a balanced view of both sides of the argument. Opposing views must be presented impartially.
    • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and feelings/emotions surrounding the candidate’s views and experiences.
    • If narrative, a strong story line illustrating the statement must be evident. There must be a logical sequence of tense. [50]

1.5 Do not think of today’s failures but of the successes that may come tomorrow.

  • Discursive/Reflective/Narrative essay
  • The following must be considered:
    • If discursive, the essay must offer a balanced view of both sides of the argument. Opposing views must be presented impartially.
    • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and feelings/emotions surrounding the candidate’s views and experiences.
    • If narrative, a strong story line illustrating the statement must be evident. There must be a logical sequence of tense. [50]

1.6 Parents and teachers are the voices of experience. Children should, therefore, live by their rules. Do you agree?

  • Argumentative essay
  • The following must be considered:
    • The essay must offer one distinct opinion; therefore the essay must be either FOR OR AGAINST the topic given.
    • There should be a clear defence/motivation/argument for the position taken. [50]

1.7 Interpretation of pictures

  • Candidates may interpret the pictures in any way.
  • The interpretation should be linked to the pictures.
  • Candidates must give the essay a suitable title.
  • Candidates may write in any appropriate tense.
  • The following ideas, (among others) may be explored in response to the pictures:

1.7.1 

  • Literal interpretation: e.g. reference to money, saving money, etc.
  • Abstract interpretation: e.g. economy, wealth, money is not needed to lead a fruitful life, vices associated with money, etc. [50]

1.7.2

  • Literal interpretation: e.g. babies crawling, the beauty of babies, teenage pregnancy, etc.
  • Abstract interpretation: e.g. social grant, the future generation, innocence, future leaders, etc. [50]

TOTAL SECTION A: 50

SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 2
2.1 FORMAL LETTER

  • The letter should be addressed to the mayor.
  • The tone and register of the letter must be formal.
  • The following aspects of format must be included:
    • Writer’s address
    • Date
    • Recipient’s address
    • Greeting/Salutation
    • Heading/Subject line
    • Suitable ending
    • Closing, signature, name of sender
  • The following information must be included in the letter, among others:
    • Purpose for writing
    • Candidate’s views  [30]

2.2 OBITUARY

Related Items

  • The tone must be formal.
  • The following aspects of format should be included:
    • Full name of the deceased
    • Date of death
    • Date of birth.
  • The following information may also be included:
    • Birthplace
    • Where the person was living at the time of death
    • Key survivors (spouse, children) and their names
    • Date and time of funeral
    • Biographical information.
    • A tribute must be paid to the deceased. [30]

2.3 MAGAZINE ARTICLE

  • The article must have a heading.
  • The content must be about addiction to social networks.
  • The dangers of social networking must be emphasised in this article.
  • The language may be formal/ informal.
  • The style should be personal, speaking directly to the reader.
  • The article should stimulate interest and keep the reader absorbed. [30]

2.4 INFORMAL SPEECH

  • The speech must be in paragraph form.
  • The tone of the speech must be informal.
  • The language and register must be appropriate to the audience (the family members and friends).
  • The audience should be addressed appropriately.
  • Consider the following:
    • The content of the speech should be relevant to the topic (welcoming a brother/sister back home and congratulating him/her on completing his/her studies).
    • A logical and an appropriate closure to the speech must be evident.
    • Different approaches to the presentation of the speech should be accepted. [30]

SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 3
3.1 POSTER

  • The poster must include details about the book club.
  • Sufficient details must be given to attract members of the community.
  • Catchy words and phrases must be credited.
  • No marks are awarded for illustrations. [20]

3.2 DIARY ENTRIES

  • There must be TWO entries.
  • Each entry must bear a date.
  • The tone must be personal. [20]

3.3 INSTRUCTIONS

  • The goal must be specified, e.g. How to prepare and present a speech.
  • The instructions may be in point or paragraph form.
  • The instructions must be given in sequence.
  • The instructions must be clear. [20]

TOTAL SECTION C: 20
GRAND TOTAL: 100

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR ESSAY – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]

Criteria   Exceptional Skilful Moderate Elementary Inadequate
CONTENT & PLANNING
(Response and ideas)
Organisation of ideas for planning;
Awareness of purpose, audience and context
30 MARKS 
Upper level 28-30 22-24 16-18 10-12 4-6
  • Outstanding/Striking response beyond normal expectations
  • Intelligent, thought-provoking and mature ideas
  • Exceptionally well organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
  • Very well-crafted response
  • Fully relevant and interesting ideas with evidence of maturity
  • Very well organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
  • Satisfactory response
  • Ideas are reasonably coherent and convincing
  • Reasonably organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
  • Inconsistently coherent response
  • Unclear ideas and unoriginal
  • Little evidence of organisation and coherence
  • Totally irrelevant response
  • Confused and unfocused ideas
  • Vague and repetitive
  • Unorganised and incoherent
Lower level 25-27 19-21 13-15 7-9 0-3
  • Excellent response but lacks the exceptionally striking qualities of the outstanding essay
  • Mature and intelligent ideas
  • Skilfully organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion/ending

 

  • Well-crafted response
  • Relevant and interesting ideas
  • Well organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion
  • Satisfactory response but some lapses in clarity
  • Ideas are fairly coherent and convincing
  • Some degree of organisation and coherence, including introduction, body and conclusion
  • Largely irrelevant response
  • Ideas tend to be disconnected and confusing
  • Hardly any evidence of organisation and coherence
  • No attempt to respond to the topic
  • Completely irrelevant and inappropriate
  • Unfocused and muddled
  

LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING

Tone, register, style, vocabulary appropriate to purpose/effect and context;
Word choice;
Language use and conventions, punctuation, grammar, spelling
15 MARKS

 
Upper level  14-15 11-12 8-9  5-6 0-3
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Language confident, exceptionally impressive
  • Compelling and rhetorically effective in tone
  • Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling
  • Very skilfully crafted
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Language is effective and a consistently appropriate tone is used
  • Largely error-free in grammar and spelling
  • Very well crafted
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Appropriate use of language to convey meaning
  • Tone is appropriate
  • Rhetorical devices used to enhance content
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary not appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Very basic use of language
  • Tone and diction are inappropriate
  • Very limited vocabulary
  •  Language incomprehensible
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Vocabulary limitations so extreme as to make comprehension impossible
Lower Level  13 10 7  4  
  • Language excellent and rhetorically effective in tone
  • Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling
  • Skilfully crafted
  • Language engaging and generally effective
  • Appropriate and effective tone
  • Few errors in grammar and spelling
  • Well crafted
  • Adequate use of language with some inconsistencies
  • Tone generally appropriate and limited use of rhetorical devices
  • Inadequate use of language
  • Little or no variety in sentence
  • Exceptionally limited vocabulary
 
STRUCTURE
Features of text;
Paragraph development and sentence
construction
5 MARKS
    5 4 3  2 0-1
  • Excellent development of topic
  • Exceptional detail
  • Sentences, paragraphs exceptionally well constructed
  •  Logical development of details
  • Coherent
  • Sentences, paragraphs logical, varied
  • Relevant details developed
  • Sentences, paragraphs well constructed
  • Essay still makes sense
  •  Some valid points
  • Sentences and paragraphs faulty
  • Essay still makes some sense
  •  Necessary points lacking
-Sentences and paragraphs faulty
-Essay lacks sense
 MARK RANGE   43-50 33-40 23-40 13-20 0-10

 

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]

Criteria Exceptional Skilful Moderate Elementary Inadequate

CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT
Response and ideas;
Organisation of ideas for planning;
Purpose, audience, features/conventions and context
18 MARKS

15-18 11-14 8-10 5-7 0-4
  • Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
  • Intelligent and mature ideas
  • Extensive knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Writing maintains focus
  • Coherence in content and ideas
  • Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
  • Appropriate and accurate format
  • -Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Maintains focus – no digressions
  • Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
  • Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies
  • Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Not completely focused – some digressions
  • -Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
  • Some details support the topic
  • Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
  • Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Some focus but writing digresses
  • Not always coherent in content and ideas
  • Few details support the topic
  • Necessary rules of format vaguely applied
  • Some critical oversights
  • Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Meaning obscure with major digressions
  • Not coherent in content and ideas
  • Very few details support the topic
  • Necessary rules of format not applied
  

LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING

Tone, register, style, purpose/effect, audience and context;
Language use and conventions;
Word choice;
Punctuation and spelling

12 MARKS

 
10-12 8-9 6-7 4-5 0-3
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Grammatically accurate and well constructed
  • Virtually error-free
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Generally grammatically accurate and well constructed
  • Very good vocabulary
  • Mostly free of errors
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Some grammatical errors
  • Adequate vocabulary
  • Errors do not impede meaning
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
    -Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
  • Limited vocabulary
    -Meaning obscured
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
  • Error-ridden and confused
  • Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
  • Meaning seriously impaired
MARK RANGE 25-30 19-23 14-17 9-12 0-7

 

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]

Criteria Exceptional Skilful Moderate Elementary Inadequate

CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT
Response and ideas;
Organisation of ideas;
Features/conventions and context
12 MARKS

10-12 8-9 6-7 4-5 0-3
  • Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
  • Intelligent and mature ideas
  • Extensive knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Writing maintains focus
  • Coherence in content and ideas
  • Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
  • Appropriate and accurate format
  • Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Maintains focus – no digressions
  • Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
  • Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies

  • Adequate response, demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Not completely focused –some digressions
  • Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
  • Some details support the topic
  • Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
  • Basic response, demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Some focus but writing digresses
  • Not always coherent in content and ideas
  • Few details support the topic
  • Necessary rules of format vaguely applied
  • Some critical oversights
  • Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Meaning obscure with major digressions
  • Not coherent in content and ideas
  • Very few details support the topic
  • Necessary rules of format not applied
  

LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING

Tone, register, style, vocabulary appropriate to purpose and context;
Language use and conventions;
Word choice;
Punctuation and spelling

8 MARKS

 
10-12 8-9 6-7 4-5 0-3
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Grammatically accurate and well constructed
  • Virtually error-free
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Generally grammatically accurate and well constructed
  • Very good vocabulary
  • Mostly free of errors
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Some grammatical errors
  • Adequate vocabulary
  • Errors do not impede meaning
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
  • Limited vocabulary
  • Meaning obscured

  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
  • Error-ridden and confused
  • Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
  • Meaning seriously impaired
MARK RANGE 17-20 13-15 10-11 7-8 0-5

 

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