ENGLISH HOME LANGUAGE PAPER 2
GRADE 12
NATIONAL SENIOR CERTIFICATE EXAMINATIONS
MEMORANDUM
MAY/JUNE 2019
NOTE TO MARKERS
INSTRUCTIONS
SECTION A: POETRY PRESCRIBED POETRY QUESTION 1: POETRY – ESSAY QUESTION
'FUNERAL BLUES' – W. H. Auden
While the speaker may be exploring his feelings of grief and hopelessness at the loss of his loved one, the incongruity between the everyday images the speaker refers to undercuts the intensity of this outpouring of grief. Credit reference to the satirical element.
QUESTION 2: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
'VULTURES' – Chinua Achebe
2.1 The vulture’s bald head exposes its misshapen, unnatural-looking head. It is
perceived as a revolting/repulsive/disgusting looking creature.
[Award 2 marks for any two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
2.2 These lines suggest that love can exist even in deathly circumstances. It can suppress any sense of the horror of the scene by avoiding/ignoring the horror/harsh reality which surrounds it.
[Award 2 marks for any two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
2.3 The image of a 'human roast' is particularly shocking: human beings are being incinerated and the smell of burning flesh lingers in the air. The image emphasises the cruelty of the concentration camps. The smell of burning flesh that clings to the Commandant's nostrils is a disturbing reminder of how the persecuted were incinerated in the camps. It is effective because it conveys the inhumane treatment of human beings and how the Commandant regarded it as a natural part of his day – incinerating human flesh is like cooking a roast. The sense of evil is intensified by the imagery of cannibalism. In his view, there is nothing unusual about it.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
2.4 AGREE
Just as the disgusting vultures are capable of affection and tenderness, the Commandant, in spite of his cruelty and evil perpetrated on a daily basis, is loving and caring. The contradiction between the disgusting appearance and the eating habits of the vultures is juxtaposed with their intimate behaviour toward each other. It is a shocking revelation to the reader because it is so unexpected. The actions of the Commandant at work are juxtaposed with his actions on the way home. It is astounding that someone who is so callous can be capable of such fondness and consideration. The contrasting actions and emotions are alarming and make the reader question the ability of good and evil to live side by side.
Candidates might refer to the paradoxes being well-established in our consideration of the nature of evil and its co-existence with the more appealing human possibilities.
[A cogent 'Disagree' response is unlikely. However, treat all responses on their merits.]
[Credit valid alternative responses.]
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
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QUESTION 3: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
'FELIX RANDAL' – Gerard Manley Hopkins
3.1 The speaker appears to be unaffected because the question is asked in a matter-of-fact, detached manner. He has been expecting the news because Felix Randal has been ill for a long time./He fulfilled his duty as a priest by comforting the farrier during his illness and might feel relieved that Felix Randal's suffering is at an end.
Credit responses that suggest the speaker is saddened.
[Award 2 marks for any two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
3.2 The repetition conveys the slow/gradual and on-going decline that illness has on Felix Randal. It is both physically debilitating and emotionally draining. It emphasises his yearning to regain his former strength.
Credit responses that focus on rhythm in this line.
[Award 2 marks for any two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
3.3 The statement indicates the intense nature of the relationship that has developed between the speaker and Felix Randal. The speaker realises that in as much as he has comforted Felix, he has also gained compassion and solace from Felix. Initially, he displayed sympathy for Felix's illness but as he ministers to him, he becomes more empathetic.
[Credit valid alternative responses.]
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
3.4 The central idea of the poem is that all people, despite their physical strength, are vulnerable and susceptible to illness and suffering. Felix Randal once possessed great power and energy and was respected by others for his strength, as well as his active, lively and energetic character. However, the illness reduces him to a weak and helpless man, reliant on others. Felix at first rails against his illness, but in time, with the help of the speaker, he finds comfort in his faith and comes to accept his fate as inevitable.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
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QUESTION 4: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
'AN AFRICAN THUNDERSTORM' – David Rubadiri
4.1 The use of 'wind whistles' conveys the shrill, high-pitched, piercing sound of the wind as it speeds by. The 'din of whirling wind' conveys the rapid, swirling, spiralling movement of the wind. The sound is deafening.
[Award 2 marks for any two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
4.2 The clouds are heavy, rounded in shape and full of rain. The clouds will release the rain, which will be life-giving, just as a pregnant woman brings life into the world when giving birth. Pregnancy is a symbol of fertility, as is the rain which contributes to the fertility of the land.
[Award 2 marks for any two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
4.3 The image is effective because a plague of locusts overwhelms the landscape and is an unstoppable force, like the wind and the approaching storm. Like a plague of locusts, the storm is widespread and darkens the sky. The image also conveys the relentless progress of the storm, and the destructive power it will unleash. The storm might destroy the fields and crops as locusts do. The image effectively conveys man's helplessness and vulnerability to the ravages of nature.
Candidates might refer to the image being a Biblical allusion and the significance thereof.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
4.4 The short, abrupt lines indicate that the wind unexpectedly twists and turns. The lines also convey the panicky movement of the women because of their fear of the wind. The enjambment conveys the swirling, continuous movement of the wind which rushes by at great speed. The screams of the children spiral in the twirling wind. The speaker is afraid of the wind because it is unpredictable, dangerous, relentless and destructive.
Candidates might refer to the speaker being in awe of the power of the wind.
[Award 3 marks only if structure and attitude are fully discussed.] (3)
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UNSEEN POETRY (COMPULSORY)
QUESTION 5: CONTEXTUAL QUESTION 'BLESSING' – Imtiaz Dharker
5.1 The image suggests that it is so dry that the earth has become dehydrated and has 'cracked' or shrunk, leaving gaps in its surface. It implies that the area is drought-stricken.
[Award 2 marks for any two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
5.2 ‘Silver’ suggests that the water is clean and sparkles in the sunlight. In addition, silver is a precious metal, which suggests that the water is a precious commodity; it is valuable and something to be treasured.
[Award 2 marks for any two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
5.3 The sudden bounty of water has created a mood of jubilance/ exuberance/excitement among the people who have come from all over to share in the spoils. The lack of punctuation in 'every man woman/child' emphasises the chaotic gathering of people, and the word, 'butts' suggests how they are pushing and shoving to get near the water. The listing of a variety of receptacles in which to hold the precious water and the use of the word, 'frantic' also convey the urgent/desperate mood.
[Award 3 marks only if mood is fully discussed.] (3)
5.4 AGREE
The title, 'Blessing' alerts the reader that the water is an offering from 'a kindly god'. For the people who live in this deprived environment, it is as though a 'god' is easing their suffering by bestowing on them a gift of water. They gather around the burst pipe with the same reverence as a congregation attending a prayer service. The water has a cleansing and purifying effect on them. There is the suggestion that it has the same uplifting effect as the sound of a congregation or choir singing in a church.
[A cogent 'Disagree' response is unlikely. However, treat all responses on their merits.]
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
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TOTAL SECTION A: 30
SECTION B: NOVEL
QUESTION 6: THE PICTURE OF DORIAN GRAY – ESSAY QUESTION
Qualities such as selfishness, cruelty to others as well as harmful, depraved or corrupt behaviour might be considered reprehensible.
[Candidates might refer to other characters whose behaviour might be considered reprehensible in their argument.]
[Credit valid alternative responses.] [25]
QUESTION 7: THE PICTURE OF DORIAN GRAY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
7.1 Dorian Gray has the appearance of a Greek god. He is like a statue which is worshipped for its beauty. The 'ivory' and 'rose-leaves' refer to his complexion and create the impression that he is a romantic figure. The comparison with Adonis suggests that Dorian is loved and admired for his attractiveness.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
7.2 Basil believes that his feelings for Dorian are reflected in the portrait and will be obvious for all to see. He is concerned that the portrait exposes his preoccupation with Dorian and the intensity of his affection. Basil feels vulnerable and is afraid of being ridiculed for his adoration of Dorian.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
7.3 Basil believes that all people will have to pay a price for the gifts/talents given to them. Dorian suffers as a result of his obsession with his youth and beauty. He experiences brief moments of suffering and regret because of his sordid lifestyle. Over time, these feelings intensify and ultimately lead to his destruction of the portrait, and his own death. Basil is tormented by the realisation that his painting has contributed to Dorian's depravity. He suffers when he sees what Dorian has become and feels that he has been punished for his worshipping of Dorian. His murder is the ultimate price he has to pay for his artistic talent.
Candidates might argue that Lord Henry, who has the gifts of wealth and rank, seems immune to suffering.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
7.4
Lord Henry's smoking an 'opium-tainted cigarette' indicates the hedonistic lifestyle led by many members of the upper classes. They lead lives of leisure and indulge in questionable behaviour. They have no need to work and thus their lives are shallow and lack purpose. Indolent, pampered and self-indulged, their own comfort is paramount to them. They are frivolous, carefree and nonchalant. As observers rather than active participants in society, they are largely unconcerned with the problems faced by the less fortunate.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
7.5 The portrait makes the concept of the soul real to Dorian. This physical manifestation of his soul makes him aware of how his soul has been corrupted and disfigured by his debauched lifestyle. Each time he sees the effects of his actions on the portrait, he realises the irrevocable damage he has done to his soul and how he is unable to redeem himself. His conscience has come to weigh heavily on him.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
7.6 YES
Lord Henry enjoys making startling pronouncements. Lord Henry's pre-occupation with youth is evident earlier in the novel when he tells Dorian that 'youth is the one thing worth having'. Lord Henry suggests that he is not a respectable person and thus is unable to 'get back [his] youth'; however, there is no indication that his behaviour is disreputable. He makes many controversial statements but does not appear to act on them although others do. Lord Henry is cynical and has an apparently casual/flippant attitude toward life.
[A cogent 'No' response is unlikely. However, treat all responses on their merits.]
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
7.7 VALID
Dorian is no longer the innocent, naive young man who was introduced to Lord Henry. He has become worldly-wise and cynical. His dissolute lifestyle influences others yet he is unconcerned about the corrupting impact he has on his companions.
OR
INVALID
As a young man, Dorian's self-absorption and wilfulness suggest he might develop a tendency toward immoral behaviour. He shows no sincere concern for other people. As a pampered youth and member of the aristocracy, Dorian has always felt a sense of entitlement and that his privilege protects him from censure. Therefore, he has not changed: his behaviour is simply manifested in more overtly immoral actions. Whereas his earlier exploits were fairly innocuous and excusable, they are now depraved and denounced by certain members of his society.
[Accept valid alternative/mixed responses.]
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
7.8 YES
Dorian acknowledges the evil influence he has had on the lives of other people and he wonders whether he is able to make amends by acts of self-sacrifice. His realisation that his life has been dedicated to a theory that has not brought him the pleasure he thought it would culminates in his lashing out at the portrait. Dorian's ability to show regret is a redeeming quality.
OR
NO
Candidates might argue that Dorian's commitment to a hedonistic lifestyle leads him to committing acts of immorality for which he cannot be redeemed. He is eventually unable to live with his conscience and in desperation destroys the portrait and ultimately himself.
[Accept valid alternative/mixed responses.]
[Award 4 marks for any three ideas well discussed OR four ideas.] (4)
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LIFE OF PI – Yann Martel
QUESTION 8: LIFE OF PI – ESSAY QUESTION
[Accept valid alternative/mixed responses.]
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QUESTION 9: LIFE OF PI – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
9.1 Pi hopes that being at a new school will allow him to escape the teasing/ torment by his classmates and even some of the teachers at St Joseph's. This is because of his nickname, 'Pissing', which is a distortion of his name, 'Piscine'. Pi feels misunderstood because his nickname inhibits him from being taken seriously. A new environment will allow him to prove that there is more to him than his derogatory nickname.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
9.2 There is an element of sibling rivalry between Pi and Ravi. Pi finds it difficult to follow in the footsteps of a popular and much admired elder brother. As the older brother, Ravi is insensitive and enjoys teasing him at times. Despite the rivalry, there is also a close bond between them. Pi looks for the opportunity to share experiences that Ravi would enjoy. Having lost his brother, Pi thinks of him fondly and with regret. [Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
9.3 His plan is to make himself known as Pi instead of 'Pissing'. In dealing with the problem of his name, Pi displays imagination, assertiveness and resourcefulness. These qualities manifest themselves when he is trapped on the lifeboat. His ingenious resourcefulness enables him to survive. Rather than allowing himself to be overcome by his fear of Richard Parker, he asserts himself in taming the tiger to ensure his safety. His imagination enables him to invent stories as a way to pass the time and to distract him from the reality of his situation. He solves the problem of his own savagery by creating Richard Parker as his alter ego.
[Accept valid alternative responses.]
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
9.4 Pi's choice of the mathematical symbol (which is also a Greek letter) is significant because it is an irrational number that scientists use in an attempt to understand the logical/rational nature of the universe. It replaces the derogatory connotation of his name with a more intellectual and respectable one and restores his sense of dignity. After being shipwrecked, Pi has many experiences that cannot be rationally explained. Pi's faith also defies rationality. The symbol has connotations of infinity which relates to Pi's seemingly endless experience at sea. The Japanese officials force Pi to rationally explain his ordeal, resulting in the existence of two versions of his story, neither one of which has factual evidence to support it. [Accept valid alternative responses.] [Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
9.5 At the sight of the tanker, all Pi's previous despondency/despair vanishes. His hurt at the tragic loss of his family and his frustration at being stranded on the lifeboat disappear when he thinks he is about to be rescued. His spirits lift at the thought of being saved. The lines emphasise the extremes of emotion that he experiences.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
9.6 The mood is one of blind terror/dread/fear/horror. Pi becomes aware of the possibility of their impending destruction. The comparison of the tanker to a 'vast wall of metal' and a 'juggernaut' has connotations of an ominous force crushing whatever is in its path. The word, 'relentless' implies that the wave is an unstoppable, merciless force that will easily overpower and destroy the lifeboat. This image emphasises the vulnerability of the lifeboat and its occupants and there is a real sense that all their hopes of rescue will be dashed. [Award full marks only if mood is discussed.] (3)
9.7 The tanker is compared to a priest offering 'salvation'. The reference to 'robe' has religious connotations, referring to spiritual redemption and hope. Pi associates the tanker with rescue and escape from his ordeal. This illustrates Pi's optimism and strong faith as he believes his prayers of being rescued have been answered.
[Award full marks only if the image is clearly discussed.] (3)
9.8 VALID Pi embraces the three main religions of India, which illustrates that it is faith in general, rather than one specific religion that sustains him and helps him survive his ordeal at sea. Pi is a deeply spiritual person and his only desire is to love God. He believes that all religions share common values. In his moments of despair and hopelessness on the lifeboat, it is his faith that gives him the strength to persevere. Whenever something good happens to him, as in this extract, he expresses his gratitude to God. Candidates might refer to Pi's daily spiritual rituals which sustain him, give him hope during his ordeal and uplift his spirits. [A cogent 'Invalid' response is unlikely. However, treat all responses on their merits.] [Accept valid alternative/mixed responses.] [Award 4 marks for any three ideas well discussed OR four ideas.] (4)
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SECTION C: DRAMA
HAMLET – William Shakespeare
QUESTION 10: HAMLET – ESSAY QUESTION
Candidates must demonstrate an understanding that, while foul deeds do permeate the play, honour and integrity are restored in Denmark when certain characters redeem themselves.
[Credit mixed responses/valid alternative responses.]
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QUESTION 11: HAMLET – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
11.1 Hamlet's assumption that Horatio is mocking him stems from his anger because of his mother's hasty marriage to her brother-in-law. He is scornful and resents his mother because she has betrayed his father's memory. Hamlet is horrified by his mother's incestuous relationship with Claudius. He is bitter since Claudius has usurped the throne of Denmark, which is rightfully his.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
11.2 Horatio is Hamlet's close friend and confidant. It is he who brings Hamlet the news of the appearance of King Hamlet's ghost. He is also completely trustworthy and loyal to Hamlet, keeping his secrets and helping Hamlet in his quest to avenge his father's murder. After Hamlet's death, his loyalty to Hamlet endures as he takes responsibility for restoring Hamlet's reputation. Although Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are old school friends of Hamlet’s and claim to be loyal to him, they betray him and allow themselves to become Claudius's spies in return for material gain and favour.
[Award 3 marks only if both relationships are discussed.] (3)
11.3 Claudius is not a 'goodly king' because he is power-hungry, lustful and ruthless. He murders his brother, usurps the throne of Denmark and marries his sister-in-law. Claudius is devious in achieving his ends. He wickedly plots Hamlet's death and cowardly uses others to do his despicable bidding. His desire to repent his deeds is a sham as he is not prepared to give up the throne or Gertrude. Although he tells Gertrude not to drink from the cup, his selfishness overpowers his love for her.
[Candidates might offer a mixed response by referring to Claudius’s competence as a king.]
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
11.4 The armour identifies the ghost as being that of King Hamlet. The soldiers remember his being dressed identically when he fought against the King of Norway. The ghost's appearance in armour suggests that it is troubled, seeks revenge and serves as a warning of corruption and impending doom in Denmark. The king's appearance in armour is regarded as an omen of grave danger to the state.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
11.5 Laertes challenges Hamlet to a duel to avenge the death of his father, Polonius, at Hamlet's hands. The duel is part of the treacherous plot that Claudius and Laertes have conceived to kill Hamlet. Claudius has convinced Laertes that killing Hamlet will prove his love for his father.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
11.6 Hamlet might glare at Claudius and then point his sword/raise his hands/arms authoritatively/point at the doors/turn to the guards as he orders the doors to be locked. His tone might be outraged/furious in reaction to hearing about Claudius's perfidy. Then his tone might become commanding/forceful as he orders the guards to ensure that Claudius does not escape.
[Accept valid alternative responses.]
[The candidate's response should be convincing in context.]
[Award 3 marks only if the candidate refers to body language and tone, and includes a justification.] (3)
11.7 The cry is in response to Hamlet's stabbing of the king. The court regards Claudius as the rightful king of Denmark and thus perceive Hamlet's actions as treasonous. However, they are completely unaware of Claudius's treachery as he is the one who murdered King Hamlet and usurped his throne./Hamlet's actions are not treasonous as he is the rightful heir to the throne and he is restoring order to Denmark.
[Award 3 marks only if irony is discussed.] (3)
11.8 AGREE
After the pirates assist him in returning to Denmark, Hamlet is filled with new-found confidence and no longer procrastinates. Hamlet's apology to Laertes for any wrong he has done to him is sincere and he is prepared to accept the outcome of the duel. Hamlet is calm and focused, prepared to affirm himself and fulfil his duty. Hamlet believes that his killing of Claudius is justified as he is convinced that Claudius deserves to be punished. Knowing his death is imminent, Hamlet requests Horatio to reveal the truth so that his vengeful actions can be viewed as noble. It is honourable that Hamlet's dying wish is to restore the reputation of Denmark by naming Fortinbras as his successor.
OR
DISAGREE
Although Hamlet is motivated by a noble desire to avenge his father's death, the means by which he achieves his revenge compromises his honour. He resorts to deception and underhandedness in his need to uncover the truth.
[Accept valid alternative/mixed responses.]
[Award 4 marks for any three ideas well discussed OR four ideas.] (4)
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OTHELLO – William Shakespeare
QUESTION 12: OTHELLO – ESSAY QUESTION
Despite the evil in the play, traits of honour and integrity will prevail.
QUESTION 13: OTHELLO – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
13.1 Knowing that Cassio has a weakness for alcohol, Iago devises a plan to get Cassio drunk. Iago instructs Roderigo to taunt Cassio, knowing that Cassio is easily provoked when inebriated and will respond violently. Montano intervenes in the brawl and accuses Cassio of being drunk. In response, Cassio attacks and wounds Montano.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
13.2 Othello's outburst reflects his potential for passion to overrule his reason. These lines show that he is overwhelmed by anger and he admits that he is in danger of losing control. Iago will use this knowledge and push Othello to a point where he will not be able to think rationally. He will drive Othello mad with jealousy through innuendos about Desdemona and Cassio. This will result in the destruction of Othello, Desdemona and others.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
13.3 A mixed response would demonstrate a comprehensive understanding of the play. OR YES Cassio is responsible for the loss of his reputation because, despite knowing that he has a low tolerance for alcohol, he yields to Iago's persuasion to have more than one drink. He shows dereliction of duty by ignoring Othello's instruction to take charge of the watch. OR NO Cassio's loss of reputation is part of Iago's plan of revenge to get Cassio dismissed. He deliberately encourages Cassio to drink, knowing that Cassio has a low tolerance for alcohol and will easily lose his temper if provoked. Furthermore, Cassio's involvement in the brawl is set up by Iago to bring Cassio into disrepute. [Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
13.4 It is ironic that Iago alludes to Cassio as a friend and gives the impression that he wishes to protect him. However, it is Iago's intention to destroy Cassio by engineering the events which lead to the brawl. Furthermore, Iago states that he does not wish to speak out against Cassio, but his words lead to Cassio's dismissal and the tragic destruction of Othello and Desdemona.
[Award 3 marks only if irony is discussed.] (3)
13.5 Roderigo is displeased with the lack of progress in winning Desdemona's favour. He has confronted Iago about returning the gifts he has made to Desdemona and expresses the desire to return to Venice. He also states that he will approach Desdemona directly, asking for the return of his gifts. Iago has to prevent this from happening. He therefore manipulates Roderigo into killing Cassio when he leaves Bianca's home.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
13.6 To ensure that Roderigo is concealed and able to ambush Cassio, Iago might grab Roderigo by the shoulders/push him into position/touch Roderigo's elbow/point him toward 'the bulk'. Iago might use forceful hand movements to indicate how Roderigo should use his sword to stab Cassio. Iago might initially use a conspiratorial tone, and then an urgent/firm/commanding/ persuasive tone to strengthen Roderigo's resolve and give him the courage that he needs.
[Accept valid alternative responses.]
[The candidate's response should be convincing in context.]
[Award 3 marks only if the candidate refers to body language and tone, and includes a justification.] (3)
13.7 Early in the play, Othello regards Desdemona as 'his soul's joy'. His happiness is dependent on his love for Desdemona. Their relationship is based on mutual respect and admiration. However, as a result of his insecurities and jealousy, Othello has come to distrust Desdemona. He sees her as a prostitute and accuses her of lasciviousness. In his mind, she is so tainted that she deserves to die in the bed in which she has committed lustful acts with Cassio. Othello is filled with abhorrence by her promiscuous behaviour and vows that he will no longer be influenced by her charms.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
13.8 A mixed response would demonstrate a comprehensive understanding of the play.
OR
AGREE
Othello regards himself as an 'honourable murderer' and sees himself as executing justice. In his mind, Desdemona's alleged infidelity constitutes a betrayal which must be punished. This decision is influenced by his military background. Once he realises that he has taken the life of an innocent person, he metes out justice on himself. Before he dies, he expresses regret and remorse, thus redeeming himself.
OR
DISAGREE
Although Othello attempts to justify his murder of Desdemona as 'honourable', it is clear that his actions are prompted by a desire for revenge. The unholy pact he makes with Iago to have both Desdemona and Cassio eliminated is dishonourable. His refusal to allow Desdemona to defend herself before killing her is morally reprehensible. His act of suicide might be perceived as a means of escaping punishment.
[Award 4 marks for any three ideas well discussed OR four ideas.] (4)
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THE CRUCIBLE – Arthur Miller
QUESTION 14: THE CRUCIBLE – ESSAY QUESTION
In the play, the innocent are made to appear evil because of the accusations of witchcraft. They are at the mercy of their accusers. However, honour and integrity prevail.
[Credit valid alternative responses.]
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QUESTION 15: THE CRUCIBLE – CONTEXTUAL
15.1 Speculation about the existence of witchcraft has spread throughout Salem after the girls are found dancing in the forest. The girls are visiting Betty to see how she is. Mary is anxious about being punished as a witch and has suggested that they confess to the dancing and accept the lesser punishment. In response, Abigail has threatened the girls in order to ensure their silence and avoid any punishment.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
15.2 When the witch trials begin, Mary becomes an official of the court and, together with the other girls, she gives evidence against individuals who are alleged to be witches. After Elizabeth is arrested, Proctor convinces her to confess to the lies the girls have perpetrated. However, after Abigail intimidates her, Mary loses her resolve, retracts her statement and accuses Proctor of being the 'Devil's man'.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
15.3 A pilgrimage is a religious journey undertaken by the righteous. However, people are travelling to Salem because they are curious about the rumours of witchcraft that have been circulating in the village. They are intrigued and relish the idea of seeing evidence of witchcraft. There is nothing spiritual about the eager manner in which they approach the possible presence of demons in the village. In a highly religious community, their enjoyment of the rumours and gossip is unchristian-like. The villagers should be scandalised, not excited. Proctor's use of the word, 'pilgrimage' conveys his attitude that the villagers are hypocritical.
[Award 3 marks only if irony is discussed.] (3)
15.4 Abigail is delighted/excited at the thought of being so close to Proctor after their adulterous affair had been brought to an end. She is being flirtatious as she is keen to resume her relationship with Proctor. Her manipulative nature is evident when she flatters Proctor in the hope that he might soften toward her and return her affections. Her attitude shows her selfishness and determination to get what she wants, whatever the cost.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
15.5 Innocent women have been arrested on charges of witchcraft. The judges have been approached by Proctor, Corey and Nurse, who are pleading for their wives' release. They tell the court that the girls are frauds because Mary is prepared to admit that the girls have never seen any evil spirits.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
15.6 Proctor might rub his chin/scratch his head/chew or purse his lip/frown/gaze into the distance and cross his arms as he considers Danforth's question. Proctor's tone might be hesitant/unsure/contemplative as he considers this tempting offer that would save his wife but have dire consequences for his friends. Proctor's loyalty prevents him from being selfish.
[Accept valid alternative responses.]
[The candidate's response should be convincing in context.]
[Award 3 marks only if the candidate refers to body language and tone, and includes a justification.] (3)
15.7 Proctor's statement to the court that Elizabeth does not lie, has dreadful consequences. By making this statement, Proctor is trying to convince the court of Elizabeth's good Christian character so that they believe her when she denies ownership of the poppet. The court later believes Elizabeth's lie about Proctor's fidelity because they have been led to believe that she is an honest woman. As a result of Elizabeth's dishonesty, the court does not believe Proctor's accusations against Abigail. This ultimately leads to his condemnation.
[Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
15.8 AGREE
Although Hale initially enables the girls' vengefulness, he later realises that he has been duped by them. His desire to expose the truth and to see justice done prompts him to warn the judges that they have been manipulated. He cautions them to be more rational in their investigations. Hale publicly denounces the court, walking out in disgust. He works tirelessly to save the condemned at the expense of his own soul. Hale's efforts make people aware of the corruption and injustice of the court and the evil of the girls. Hale's integrity helps to bring an end to the trials; order and justice are restored in Salem.
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DISAGREE
Hale's promising the girls' salvation and assuring them of the villagers' gratitude for their role in exposing witchcraft encourages the spread of evil in Salem. When Hale realises that the girls have deceived him and he tries to make amends, his efforts have no real impact.
Candidates might argue that it is the integrity shown by John Proctor and Rebecca Nurse that actually put an end to the witch trials.
[Accept valid alternative/mixed responses.]
[Award 4 marks for any three ideas well discussed OR four ideas.] (4)
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TOTAL SECTION C: 25
GRAND TOTAL: 80
SECTION A: Assessment rubric for literary essay: Poetry (10 Marks)
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT 6 MARKS | 5-6 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 0-1 |
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STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE 4 MARKS | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 0-1 |
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NOTE: If a candidate has ignored the content completely and written a creative response instead, award a 0 mark for both Content and Structure and Language
SECTIONS B AND C: Assessment rubric for literary essay: Novel and Drama (25 Marks)
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT | 12-15 | 9-11 | 6-8 | 4-5 | 0-3 |
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STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE | 8-10 | 6-7 | 4-5 | 2-3 | 0-1 |
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MARK RANGE | 20-25 | 15-19 | 10-14 | 5-9 | 0-4 |
NOTE: If a candidate has ignored the content completely and written a creative response instead, award a 0 mark for both Content and Structure and Language.
There must not be more than two categories' variation between the Structure and Language mark and the Content mark.