ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE PAPER 3
GRADE 12
NATIONAL SENIOR CERTIFICATE
NOVEMBER 2019
MEMORANDUM

INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
These marking guidelines must be used together with the attached English FAL assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.

SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1

Instructions to Markers:

  • Candidates are required to write on ONE topic only.
  • The ideas listed below the topics are only some ways in which the topic could be interpreted.
  • Full credit must be given for the candidates' own interpretation.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 50-mark assessment rubric to mark the essays. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
    • Content and planning (30 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (15 marks)
    • Structure (5 marks)

NOTE:

  • Adhere to the length of 250–300 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
  • No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.

1.1 2019
Reflective/Narrative/Descriptive

  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.2 Finally, there was …
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive

  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.3 I realise that I am responsible for my own happiness.
Reflective/Discursive/Argumentative/Descriptive/Narrative

  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
  • If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
  • NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
    1.4 Good fences make good neighbours.
    Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive/Narrative
  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
  • If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.5 An amazing person
Descriptive/Reflective/Narrative

  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending. [50]

1.6 'Whatever the mind can conceive and believe, the mind can achieve'
– Dr Ntokozo Hlongwane
Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive/Descriptive/Narrative

  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
  • If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.7 Interpretation of pictures

  • The candidate should give the essay a suitable title.
  • The candidate may interpret the pictures in any way.
  • The candidate may choose to write any type of essay.
  • The interpretation must be linked to the picture.
  • The candidate may write in any appropriate tense.

1.7.1 Picture: A teddy bear
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive

  • Literal interpretations: a toy, a gift, a friend
  • Figurative interpretations: love, comfort, joy [50]

1.7.2 Picture: A man on a road
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive

  • Literal interpretations: a journey, roads/painting
  • Figurative interpretations: destiny, dreams, the journey of life [50]

TOTAL SECTION A: 50

SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 2

Instructions to Markers:

  • Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 30-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
    • Content, planning and format (18 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (12 marks)

NOTE:

  • Adhere to the length of 120 – 150 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
  • No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.

2.1 FRIENDLY LETTER
A letter giving information to a friend on places of interest to visit in your province.

Related Items

  • The following aspects of format must be included:
    • Address of sender
    • Date
    • Greeting/Salutation
    • Suitable ending
  • The tone and register of the letter should be friendly and informal.
  • The candidate must provide information on places of interest. [30]

2.2 SPEECH
A speech on the importance of reading.

  • The speech should be written beginning with a suitable salutation/ greeting.
  • The tone and register should be appropriate for the audience.
  • The speech must include the following:
    • An introduction that attracts attention
    • Well-developed points
    • A conclusion [30]

2.3 COVERING LETTER
Application for the position of caregiver.

  • Acceptable variations of format must be allowed.
  • The letter should be addressed to the manager of a nursing home for the elderly.
  • The tone and register of the letter should be formal.
  • The letter should have an introduction, a body and conclusion.
  • The following aspects of format must be included:
    • Address of sender
    • Date
    • Recipient: The Manager
    • Name of the nursing home for the elderly
    • Address of recipient
    • Greeting/Salutation
    • Subject line
    • Suitable ending
    • Signature and name of sender
  • The content of the letter must match the CV provided in the question paper. [30]

2.4 NEWSPAPER ARTICLE
An article for a local newspaper providing information on the benefits of social media for teenagers.

  • The article must have a suitable heading.
  • The article must have clearly defined paragraphs.
  • The article must provide information on the benefits of social media for teenagers.
  • The style should be personal but not informal, speaking directly to the reader.
  • The language may be formal.
  • The article should be stimulating to the reader. [30]

TOTAL SECTION B: 30

SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 3

Instructions to Markers:

  • Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 20-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the attached rubric:
    • Content, planning and format (12 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (8 marks)

NOTE:

  • Adhere to the length of 80–100 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
  • No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.

3.1 DIARY ENTRIES
The candidate's feelings before and after the principal's visit.

  • There MUST be TWO diary entries with two different dates/times.
  • The first entry must express the candidate's feelings before the principal's visit and the second entry must express the candidate's feelings after the principal's visit.
  • The diary entries must be written in the first person.
  • The language must be simple and informal.
  • The tone must reflect suitable emotions. [20]

3.2 INVITATION CARD
An invitation to the drama clubs of neighbouring schools.

  • The following aspects of format must be included:
    • Date
    • Venue
    • Time
  • Type of function should be clear.
  • Language should be suited to the context.
  • Full sentences are not necessary.

NOTE: Do not award marks for illustrations. [20]
3.3 INSTRUCTIONS
Instructions to you on how to choose a suitable wedding venue.
The instructions:

  • May be in point or paragraph form.
  • Must be in a logical sequence.
  • Must be written in the imperative. [20]

TOTAL SECTION C:20
GRAND TOTAL:100

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]

Criteria 

 

Exceptional 

Skilful 

Moderate 

Elementary 

Inadequate

CONTENT AND PLANNING (Response and ideas) 
Organisation of ideas for planning 
Awareness of purpose, audience and context 

30 MARKS

Upper Level

28–30 

22–24 

16–18 

10–12 

4–6

  • Outstanding/Striking response beyond normal  expectations.
  • Intelligent, thought-provoking and mature  ideas 
  • Exceptionally well organised and coherent  (connected) including introduction, body and  conclusion/ending.
  • Very well-crafted response. 
  • Fully relevant and interesting. 
  • Ideas with evidence of maturity 
  • Very well organised and coherent  (connected) including introduction, body  and conclusion/ending.
  • Satisfactory response 
  • Ideas are reasonably coherent  and convincing. 
  • Reasonably organised and  coherent including introduction,  body and conclusion/ending
  • Inconsistently coherent  response 
  • Unclear ideas and unoriginal
  • Little evidence of  organisation and coherence.
  • Totally irrelevant response. 
  • Confused and unfocused ideas.
  • Vague and repetitive. 
  • Unorganised and incoherent. 

Lower Level

25–27 

19–21 

13–15 

7–9 

0–3

  • Excellent response but lacks the exceptionally  striking qualities of the outstanding essay
  • Mature and intelligent ideas 
  • Skilfully organised and coherent (connected)  including introduction, body and  conclusion/ending.
  • Well-crafted response. 
  • Relevant and interesting ideas.
  • Well organised and coherent (connected)  including introduction, body and  conclusion.
  • Satisfactory response but some  lapses in clarity. 
  • Ideas are fairly coherent and  convincing.
  • Some degree of organisation and  coherence including introduction,  body and conclusion.
  • Largely irrelevant response. 
  • Ideas tend to be  disconnected and confusing. 
  • Hardly any evidence of  organisation and coherence.
  • No attempt to respond to the topic 
  • Completely irrelevant and  inappropriate
  • Unfocused and muddled

LANGUAGE, STYLE AND EDITING 
Tone, register, style,  vocabulary appropriate to  purpose/effect and context Word choice 
Language use and  conventions, punctuation,  grammar, spelling 

15 MARKS

Upper Level

14–15 

11–12 

8–9 

5–6 

0–3

  • Tone, register, style, vocabulary highly  appropriate to purpose, audience and context 
  • Language confident, exceptionally impressive  – compelling and rhetorically effective in tone.
  • Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling. 
  • Highly skilfully crafted.
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary very  appropriate to purpose, audience and  context. 
  • Language is effective and a consistently  appropriate tone is used. 
  • Largely error-free in grammar and  spelling. 
  • Very well crafted.
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary appropriate to  purpose, audience and context. 
  • Appropriate use of language to  convey meaning. 
  • Tone is appropriate.
  • Rhetorical devices used to  enhance content.
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary not appropriate to  purpose, audience and  context. 
  • Very basic use of language. 
  • Tone and diction are  inappropriate.
  • Very limited vocabulary.
  • Language incomprehensible 
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary  less appropriate to purpose,  audience and context 
  • Vocabulary limitations so extreme as  to make comprehension impossible

Lower Level

13 

10 

4

  • Language excellent and rhetorically effective  in tone. 
  • Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling. 
  • Skilfully crafted.
  • Language engaging and generally  effective 
  •  Appropriate and effective tone. 
  • Few errors in grammar and spelling.
  • Well-crafted
  • Adequate use of language with  some inconsistencies.
  • Tone generally appropriate and  limited use of rhetorical devices.
  • Inadequate use of language. 
  • Little or no variety in  sentence. 
  • Exceptionally limited  vocabulary.

STRUCTURE  
Features of text  
Paragraph development and  sentence construction  

5 MARKS

 

0–1

  • Excellent development of topic 
  • Exceptional detail 
  • Sentences, paragraphs exceptionally well constructed
  • Logical development of details 
  • Coherent 
  • Sentences, paragraphs logical, varied
  • Relevant details developed 
  • Sentences, paragraphs well constructed 
  • Essay still makes some sense
  • Some valid points 
  • Sentences and paragraphs  faulty 
  • Essay still makes sense  despite flaws.
  • Necessary points lacking 
  • Sentences and paragraphs faulty

MARKS RANGE 

 

40–50 

30–39 

20–29 

10–19 

0–9

 

SECTION B: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]

Criteria 

Exceptional 

Skilful 

Moderate 

Elementary 

Inadequate

CONTENT PLANNING  AND FORMAT 
(Response and ideas ) Organisation of ideas  for planning  
Purpose, audience and  features/conventions  and context  

18 MARKS

15–18 

11–14 

8–10 

5–7 

0–4

  • Outstanding response beyond  normal expectations 
  • Intelligent and mature ideas 
  • Extensive knowledge of features  of the type of text 
  • Writing maintains focus 
  • Coherence in content and ideas.
  • Highly elaborated and all details  support the topic 
  • Appropriate and accurate format 
  • Very good response  demonstrating good  knowledge of features of  the type of text. 
  • Maintains focus – no  digressions. 
  • Coherent in content and  ideas, very well  elaborated and details  support topic. 
  • Appropriate format with  minor inaccuracies. 
  • Adequate response  demonstrating  knowledge of features  of the type of text. 
  • Not completely focused  – some digressions. 
  • Reasonably coherent  in content and ideas 
  • Some details support  the topic
  • Generally appropriate  format but with some  inaccuracies. 
  • Basic response  demonstrating some  knowledge of  features of the type  of text. 
  • Some focus but  writing digresses. 
  • Not always coherent in content and ideas. 
  • Few details support  the topic.
  • Has vaguely applied  necessary rules of  format 
  • Some critical  oversights.
  • Response reveals no  knowledge of features  of the type of text 
  • Meaning is obscure  with major  digressions. 
  • Not coherent in content and ideas. 
  • Very few details  support the topic. 
  • Has not applied  necessary rules of  format.

LANGUAGE, STYLE  AND EDITING 
Tone, register, style,  purpose/effect,  audience and context  Language use and  conventions. 
Word choice  
Punctuation, spelling 12 MARKS

10–12 

8–9 

6–7 

4–5 

0–3

  • Tone, register, style, vocabulary  highly appropriate to purpose,  audience and context. 
  • Grammatically accurate and well constructed 
  • Virtually error-free. 
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary very  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context 
  • Generally grammatically  accurate and well constructed 
  • Very good vocabulary 
  • Mostly free of errors 
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context. 
  • Some grammatical  errors 
  • Adequate vocabulary 
  • Errors do not impede  meaning
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary less  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context 
  • Inaccurate grammar  with numerous errors 
  • Limited vocabulary
  • Meaning is obscured.
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary do not  correspond to purpose,  audience and context. 
  • Error-ridden and  confused
  • Vocabulary not suitable  for purpose 
  • Meaning seriously impaired

MARKS RANGE 

25–30 

19–23 

14–17 

9–12 

0–7

 

SECTION C: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]

Criteria 

Exceptional 

Skilful 

Moderate 

Elementary 

Inadequate

CONTENT PLANNING  AND FORMAT 
(Response and ideas) Organisation of ideas  for planning  
Purpose, audience and  features/conventions  and context  

12 MARKS

10–12 

8–9 

6–7 

4–5 

0–3

  • Outstanding response beyond  normal expectations 
  • Intelligent and mature ideas 
  • Extensive knowledge of features  of the type of text 
  • Writing maintains focus 
  • Coherence in content and ideas.
  • Highly elaborated and all details  support the topic 
  • Appropriate and accurate format 
  • Very good response  demonstrating good  knowledge of features of  the type of text. 
  • Maintains focus – no  digressions. 
  • Coherent in content and  ideas, very well  elaborated and details  support topic. 
  • Appropriate format with  minor inaccuracies. 
  • Adequate response  demonstrating  knowledge of features  of the type of text. 
  • Not completely focused  – some digressions. 
  • Reasonably coherent  in content and ideas 
  • Some details support  the topic 
  • Generally appropriate  format but with some  inaccuracies. 
  • Basic response demonstrating some  knowledge of  features of the type  of text. 
  • Some focus but  writing digresses.
  • Not always coherent in content and ideas. 
  • Few details support  the topic. 
  • Has vaguely applied  necessary rules of  format 
  • Some critical  oversights.
  • Response reveals no  knowledge of features  of the type of text 
  • Meaning is obscure  with major digressions. 
  • Not coherent in content and ideas. 
  • Very few details  support the topic. 
  • Has not applied  necessary rules of  format.

LANGUAGE, STYLE  AND EDITING 
Tone, register, style,  purpose/effect,  audience and context  Language use and  conventions.
Word choice  

Punctuation, spelling 8 MARKS

7–8 

5–6 

0–2

  • Tone, register, style, vocabulary  highly appropriate to purpose,  audience and context. 
  • Grammatically accurate and well constructed 
  • Virtually error-free. 
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary very  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context 
  • Generally grammatically  accurate and well constructed 
  • Very good vocabulary 
  • Mostly free of errors.
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context. 
  • Some grammatical  errors 
  •  Adequate vocabulary 
  • Errors do not impede  meaning.
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary less  appropriate to purpose, audience and context 
  • Inaccurate grammar  with numerous errors 
  • Limited vocabulary 
  • Meaning is obscured.
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary do not  correspond to  purpose, audience and  context. 
  • Error-ridden and  confused 
  • Vocabulary not suitable for purpose 
  • Meaning seriously  obscured

MARKS RANGE 

17–20 

13–15 

10–11 

7–8 

0–5

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