ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE PAPER 3
GRADE 12
NATIONAL SENIOR CERTIFICATE
NOVEMBER 2019
MEMORANDUM
INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
These marking guidelines must be used together with the attached English FAL assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.
SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to write on ONE topic only.
- The ideas listed below the topics are only some ways in which the topic could be interpreted.
- Full credit must be given for the candidates' own interpretation.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 50-mark assessment rubric to mark the essays. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
- Content and planning (30 marks)
- Language, style and editing (15 marks)
- Structure (5 marks)
NOTE:
- Adhere to the length of 250–300 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
- No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
1.1 2019
Reflective/Narrative/Descriptive
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.2 Finally, there was …
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.3 I realise that I am responsible for my own happiness.
Reflective/Discursive/Argumentative/Descriptive/Narrative
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
- NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.4 Good fences make good neighbours.
Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive/Narrative - If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.5 An amazing person
Descriptive/Reflective/Narrative
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending. [50]
1.6 'Whatever the mind can conceive and believe, the mind can achieve'
– Dr Ntokozo Hlongwane
Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive/Descriptive/Narrative
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.7 Interpretation of pictures
- The candidate should give the essay a suitable title.
- The candidate may interpret the pictures in any way.
- The candidate may choose to write any type of essay.
- The interpretation must be linked to the picture.
- The candidate may write in any appropriate tense.
1.7.1 Picture: A teddy bear
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive
- Literal interpretations: a toy, a gift, a friend
- Figurative interpretations: love, comfort, joy [50]
1.7.2 Picture: A man on a road
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive
- Literal interpretations: a journey, roads/painting
- Figurative interpretations: destiny, dreams, the journey of life [50]
TOTAL SECTION A: 50
SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 2
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 30-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
- Content, planning and format (18 marks)
- Language, style and editing (12 marks)
NOTE:
- Adhere to the length of 120 – 150 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
- No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
2.1 FRIENDLY LETTER
A letter giving information to a friend on places of interest to visit in your province.
Related Items
- The following aspects of format must be included:
- Address of sender
- Date
- Greeting/Salutation
- Suitable ending
- The tone and register of the letter should be friendly and informal.
- The candidate must provide information on places of interest. [30]
2.2 SPEECH
A speech on the importance of reading.
- The speech should be written beginning with a suitable salutation/ greeting.
- The tone and register should be appropriate for the audience.
- The speech must include the following:
- An introduction that attracts attention
- Well-developed points
- A conclusion [30]
2.3 COVERING LETTER
Application for the position of caregiver.
- Acceptable variations of format must be allowed.
- The letter should be addressed to the manager of a nursing home for the elderly.
- The tone and register of the letter should be formal.
- The letter should have an introduction, a body and conclusion.
- The following aspects of format must be included:
- Address of sender
- Date
- Recipient: The Manager
- Name of the nursing home for the elderly
- Address of recipient
- Greeting/Salutation
- Subject line
- Suitable ending
- Signature and name of sender
- The content of the letter must match the CV provided in the question paper. [30]
2.4 NEWSPAPER ARTICLE
An article for a local newspaper providing information on the benefits of social media for teenagers.
- The article must have a suitable heading.
- The article must have clearly defined paragraphs.
- The article must provide information on the benefits of social media for teenagers.
- The style should be personal but not informal, speaking directly to the reader.
- The language may be formal.
- The article should be stimulating to the reader. [30]
TOTAL SECTION B: 30
SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 3
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 20-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the attached rubric:
- Content, planning and format (12 marks)
- Language, style and editing (8 marks)
NOTE:
- Adhere to the length of 80–100 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
- No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
3.1 DIARY ENTRIES
The candidate's feelings before and after the principal's visit.
- There MUST be TWO diary entries with two different dates/times.
- The first entry must express the candidate's feelings before the principal's visit and the second entry must express the candidate's feelings after the principal's visit.
- The diary entries must be written in the first person.
- The language must be simple and informal.
- The tone must reflect suitable emotions. [20]
3.2 INVITATION CARD
An invitation to the drama clubs of neighbouring schools.
- The following aspects of format must be included:
- Type of function should be clear.
- Language should be suited to the context.
- Full sentences are not necessary.
NOTE: Do not award marks for illustrations. [20]
3.3 INSTRUCTIONS
Instructions to you on how to choose a suitable wedding venue.
The instructions:
- May be in point or paragraph form.
- Must be in a logical sequence.
- Must be written in the imperative. [20]
TOTAL SECTION C:20
GRAND TOTAL:100
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]
Criteria | | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT AND PLANNING (Response and ideas) Organisation of ideas for planning Awareness of purpose, audience and context 30 MARKS | Upper Level | 28–30 | 22–24 | 16–18 | 10–12 | 4–6 |
- Outstanding/Striking response beyond normal expectations.
- Intelligent, thought-provoking and mature ideas
- Exceptionally well organised and coherent (connected) including introduction, body and conclusion/ending.
| - Very well-crafted response.
- Fully relevant and interesting.
- Ideas with evidence of maturity
- Very well organised and coherent (connected) including introduction, body and conclusion/ending.
| - Satisfactory response
- Ideas are reasonably coherent and convincing.
- Reasonably organised and coherent including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
| - Inconsistently coherent response
- Unclear ideas and unoriginal
- Little evidence of organisation and coherence.
| - Totally irrelevant response.
- Confused and unfocused ideas.
- Vague and repetitive.
- Unorganised and incoherent.
|
Lower Level | 25–27 | 19–21 | 13–15 | 7–9 | 0–3 |
- Excellent response but lacks the exceptionally striking qualities of the outstanding essay
- Mature and intelligent ideas
- Skilfully organised and coherent (connected) including introduction, body and conclusion/ending.
| - Well-crafted response.
- Relevant and interesting ideas.
- Well organised and coherent (connected) including introduction, body and conclusion.
| - Satisfactory response but some lapses in clarity.
- Ideas are fairly coherent and convincing.
- Some degree of organisation and coherence including introduction, body and conclusion.
| - Largely irrelevant response.
- Ideas tend to be disconnected and confusing.
- Hardly any evidence of organisation and coherence.
| - No attempt to respond to the topic
- Completely irrelevant and inappropriate
- Unfocused and muddled
|
LANGUAGE, STYLE AND EDITING Tone, register, style, vocabulary appropriate to purpose/effect and context Word choice Language use and conventions, punctuation, grammar, spelling 15 MARKS | Upper Level | 14–15 | 11–12 | 8–9 | 5–6 | 0–3 |
- Tone, register, style, vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Language confident, exceptionally impressive – compelling and rhetorically effective in tone.
- Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling.
- Highly skilfully crafted.
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context.
- Language is effective and a consistently appropriate tone is used.
- Largely error-free in grammar and spelling.
- Very well crafted.
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context.
- Appropriate use of language to convey meaning.
- Tone is appropriate.
- Rhetorical devices used to enhance content.
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary not appropriate to purpose, audience and context.
- Very basic use of language.
- Tone and diction are inappropriate.
- Very limited vocabulary.
| - Language incomprehensible
- Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Vocabulary limitations so extreme as to make comprehension impossible
|
Lower Level | 13 | 10 | 7 | 4 |
- Language excellent and rhetorically effective in tone.
- Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling.
- Skilfully crafted.
| - Language engaging and generally effective
- Appropriate and effective tone.
- Few errors in grammar and spelling.
- Well-crafted
| - Adequate use of language with some inconsistencies.
- Tone generally appropriate and limited use of rhetorical devices.
| - Inadequate use of language.
- Little or no variety in sentence.
- Exceptionally limited vocabulary.
|
STRUCTURE Features of text Paragraph development and sentence construction 5 MARKS | | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 0–1 |
- Excellent development of topic
- Exceptional detail
- Sentences, paragraphs exceptionally well constructed
| - Logical development of details
- Coherent
- Sentences, paragraphs logical, varied
| - Relevant details developed
- Sentences, paragraphs well constructed
- Essay still makes some sense
| - Some valid points
- Sentences and paragraphs faulty
- Essay still makes sense despite flaws.
| - Necessary points lacking
- Sentences and paragraphs faulty
|
MARKS RANGE | | 40–50 | 30–39 | 20–29 | 10–19 | 0–9 |
SECTION B: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT PLANNING AND FORMAT (Response and ideas ) Organisation of ideas for planning Purpose, audience and features/conventions and context 18 MARKS | 15–18 | 11–14 | 8–10 | 5–7 | 0–4 |
- Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent and mature ideas
- Extensive knowledge of features of the type of text
- Writing maintains focus
- Coherence in content and ideas.
- Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
- Appropriate and accurate format
| - Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text.
- Maintains focus – no digressions.
- Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic.
- Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies.
| - Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text.
- Not completely focused – some digressions.
- Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
- Some details support the topic
- Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies.
| - Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text.
- Some focus but writing digresses.
- Not always coherent in content and ideas.
- Few details support the topic.
- Has vaguely applied necessary rules of format
- Some critical oversights.
| - Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
- Meaning is obscure with major digressions.
- Not coherent in content and ideas.
- Very few details support the topic.
- Has not applied necessary rules of format.
|
LANGUAGE, STYLE AND EDITING Tone, register, style, purpose/effect, audience and context Language use and conventions. Word choice Punctuation, spelling 12 MARKS | 10–12 | 8–9 | 6–7 | 4–5 | 0–3 |
- Tone, register, style, vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context.
- Grammatically accurate and well constructed
- Virtually error-free.
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Generally grammatically accurate and well constructed
- Very good vocabulary
- Mostly free of errors
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context.
- Some grammatical errors
- Adequate vocabulary
- Errors do not impede meaning
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
- Limited vocabulary
- Meaning is obscured.
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context.
- Error-ridden and confused
- Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
- Meaning seriously impaired
|
MARKS RANGE | 25–30 | 19–23 | 14–17 | 9–12 | 0–7 |
SECTION C: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT PLANNING AND FORMAT (Response and ideas) Organisation of ideas for planning Purpose, audience and features/conventions and context 12 MARKS | 10–12 | 8–9 | 6–7 | 4–5 | 0–3 |
- Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent and mature ideas
- Extensive knowledge of features of the type of text
- Writing maintains focus
- Coherence in content and ideas.
- Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
- Appropriate and accurate format
| - Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text.
- Maintains focus – no digressions.
- Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic.
- Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies.
| - Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text.
- Not completely focused – some digressions.
- Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
- Some details support the topic
- Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies.
| - Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text.
- Some focus but writing digresses.
- Not always coherent in content and ideas.
- Few details support the topic.
- Has vaguely applied necessary rules of format
- Some critical oversights.
| - Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
- Meaning is obscure with major digressions.
- Not coherent in content and ideas.
- Very few details support the topic.
- Has not applied necessary rules of format.
|
LANGUAGE, STYLE AND EDITING Tone, register, style, purpose/effect, audience and context Language use and conventions. Word choice Punctuation, spelling 8 MARKS | 7–8 | 5–6 | 4 | 3 | 0–2 |
- Tone, register, style, vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context.
- Grammatically accurate and well constructed
- Virtually error-free.
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Generally grammatically accurate and well constructed
- Very good vocabulary
- Mostly free of errors.
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context.
- Some grammatical errors
- Adequate vocabulary
- Errors do not impede meaning.
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
- Limited vocabulary
- Meaning is obscured.
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context.
- Error-ridden and confused
- Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
- Meaning seriously obscured
|
MARKS RANGE | 17–20 | 13–15 | 10–11 | 7–8 | 0–5 |