ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE PAPER 3
GRADE 12
NOVEMBER 2020
MEMORANDUM
NATIONAL SENIOR CERTIFICATE
INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
These marking guidelines must be used together with the attached English FAL assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.
SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to write on ONE topic only.
- The ideas listed below the topics are only some ways in which the topic could be interpreted.
- Full credit must be given for the candidates' own interpretation.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 50-mark assessment rubric to mark the essays. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
- Content and planning (30 marks)
- Language, style and editing (15 marks)
- Structure (5 marks)
NOTE:
- Adhere to the length of 250–300 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
- No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
1.1 My family, my life
Descriptive/Narrative/ Reflective
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.2 Later can easily become never.
Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive/Narrative
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.3 It was a wrong assumption.
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.4 It was a season of …
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.5 'You cannot change how people treat you or what they say about you. All you can do is change how you react to it' – Mahatma Gandhi.
Reflective/ Argumentative/Discursive/Narrative/Descriptive
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.6 There is more to education than just a certificate.
Argumentative/Discursive/Reflective
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.7 Interpretation of pictures
- The candidate should give the essay a suitable title.
- The candidate may interpret the pictures in any way.
- The candidate may choose to write any type of essay.
- The interpretation must be linked to the picture.
- The candidate may write in any appropriate tense.
1.7.1 Picture: A coin
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive
- Literal interpretations: saving money, finance, cost of living, money, crop farming and profits.
- Figurative interpretations: the effects of money on our lives, planning for the future, materialism.
[50]
1.7.2 Picture: Boys playing
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive
- Literal interpretations: playtime, friendship, fun, childhood.
- Figurative interpretations: innocence, childhood, memories, creativity, innovation, teamwork.
[50]
TOTAL SECTION A: 50
SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 2
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 30-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
- Content, planning and format (18 marks)
- Language, style and editing (12 marks)
NOTE:
- Adhere to the length of 120–150 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
- No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
2.1 FORMAL LETTER
A letter to thank the manager.
- Allow for acceptable variations of the format.
- The letter should be addressed to the manager of a local supermarket.
- The tone and register of the letter should be formal.
- The letter should have an introduction, a body and a conclusion.
- The following aspects of format must be included:
- Address of sender
- Date
- Recipient: The Manager
- Address of recipient
- Greeting/Salutation
- Subject line
- Suitable ending
- Signature
- Name of sender
- The letter must include details showing appreciation and gratitude to the manager.
[30]
2.2 DIALOGUE
A conversation between siblings.
- A brief context must be provided at the beginning of the dialogue.
- The dialogue must be between the siblings.
- The tone must be informal.
- The following aspects of the dialogue format must be included:
- The names of the speakers written on the left side of the page.
- A colon used after the name of the character who is speaking.
- A new line used to indicate each new speaker.
- Where necessary, actions must be given in brackets before the words are spoken.
[30]
2.3 OBITUARY
Your brother-in-law has recently passed away.
- The tone must be formal.
- The following aspects of format must be included:
- Full name of the deceased
- Date of birth
- Date of death
- Birthplace
- Where the person was living at the time of death
- Key survivors (spouse, children) and their names
- Date, time and place of funeral
- Biographical information may also be included.
- A tribute must be paid to the deceased.
[30]
2.4 MAGAZINE ARTICLE
An article for a local magazine giving career advice.
- The article must have a suitable heading.
- It must have clearly defined paragraphs.
- It must provide advice to the reader on careers.
- The style should be personal, speaking directly to the reader.
- The language may be formal.
- The article should be stimulating to the reader.
[30]
TOTAL SECTION B: 30
SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 3
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 20-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the attached rubric:
- Content, planning and format (12 marks)
- Language, style and editing (8 marks)
NOTE:
- Adhere to the length of 80–100 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
- No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
3.1 DIARY ENTRIES
The candidate's feelings before and after the friend's visit.
- There MUST be TWO diary entries with two different dates/ times.
- The first entry must express the candidate's feelings before the friend's visit and the second entry must express the candidate's feelings after the friend's visit.
- Reference must be made to the gift either implicitly or explicitly.
- The diary entries must be written in the first person.
- The language must be simple and informal.
- The tone must reflect suitable emotions.
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3.2 ADVERTISEMENT
The sale of a bicycle.
- The advertisement must:
- Have a catchy headline to attract the attention of the reader.
- Inspire action.
- Create interest in and the desire for the advertised item.
- Have the following details: a description of the bicycle, (the cost involved) and the contact details of the seller.
- The target market should be clear.
- The language may be formal or informal but not slang or colloquial.
NOTE: Do not award marks for illustrations.
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3.3 DIRECTIONS
Directions to the sports stadium
- The directions may be in either point or paragraph form.
- Complete sentences are not necessary.
- Directions must be in the correct chronological order.
- Landmarks, distances and turns must be included.
[20]
TOTAL SECTION C:20
GRAND TOTAL: 100
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR ESSAY – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]
Criteria | | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT & PLANNING - (Response and ideas) Organisation of ideas for planning;
- Awareness of purpose, audience and context
30 MARKS | UPPER LEVEL | 28–30 | 22–24 | 16–18 | 10-12 | 4-6 |
- Outstanding/Striking response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent, thought-provoking and mature ideas
- Exceptionally well organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
| - Very well-crafted response
- Fully relevant and interesting ideas with evidence of maturity
- Very well organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
| - Satisfactory response
- Ideas are reasonably coherent and convincing
- Reasonably organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
| - Inconsistently coherent response
- Unclear ideas and unoriginal
- Little evidence of organisation and coherence
| - Totally irrelevant response
- Confused and unfocused ideas
- Vague and repetitive
- Unorganised and incoherent
|
LOWER LEVEL | 25–27 | 19–21 | 13–15 | 7–9 | 0–3 |
- Excellent response but lacks the exceptionally striking qualities of the outstanding essay
- Mature and intelligent ideas
- Skilfully organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
| - Well-crafted response
- Relevant and interesting ideas
- Well organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion
| - Satisfactory response but some lapses in clarity
- Ideas are fairly coherent and convincing
- Some degree of organisation and coherence, including introduction, body and conclusion
| - Largely irrelevant response -Ideas tend to be disconnected and confusing
- Hardly any evidence of organisation and coherence
| - No attempt to respond to the topic
- Completely irrelevant and inappropriate
- Unfocused and muddled
|
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING - Tone, register, style, vocabulary appropriate to purpose/effect and context;
- Word choice; Language use and conventions, punctuation, grammar, spelling
15 MARKS | UPPER LEVEL | 14–15 | 11-12 | 8- 9 | 5- 6 | 0 – 3 |
- Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Language confident, exceptionally impressive
- Compelling and rhetorically effective in tone
- Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling
- Very skilfully crafted
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Language is effective and a consistently appropriate tone is used
- Largely error-free in grammar and spelling
- Very well crafted
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Appropriate use of language to convey meaning
- Tone is appropriate
- Rhetorical devices used to enhance content
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Very basic use of language
- Tone and diction are inappropriate
- Very limited vocabulary
| - Language incomprehensible
- Tone, register, style and vocabulary not appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- ocabulary limitations so extreme as to make comprehension impossible
|
LOWER LEVEL | 13 | 10 | 7 | 4 | |
- Language excellent and rhetorically effective in tone
- irtually error-free in grammar and spelling
- Skilfully crafted
| - Language engaging and generally effective
- Appropriate and effective tone
- Few errors in grammar and spelling
-Well crafted | - Adequate use of language with some inconsistencies
- Tone generally appropriate and limited use of rhetorical devices
| - Inadequate use of language
- Little or no variety in sentence
- Exceptionally limited vocabulary
|
STRUCTURE - Features of text;
- Paragraph development and sentence construction
5 MARKS | | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 0–1 |
- Excellent development of topic
- Exceptional detail
- Sentences, paragraphs exceptionally well-constructed
| - Logical development of details
- Coherent
- Sentences, paragraphs logical, varied
| - Relevant details developed
- Sentences, paragraphs well constructed
- Essay still makes sense
| - Some valid points
- Sentences and paragraphs faulty
- Essay still makes some sense
| - Necessary points lacking
- Sentences and paragraphs faulty
- Essay lacks sense
|
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT - Response and ideas; Organisation of ideas for planning;
- Purpose, audience, features/conventions and context
18 MARKS | 15–18 | 11-14 | 8-10 | 5-7 | 0–4 |
- Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent and mature ideas
- Extensive knowledge of features of the type of text
- Writing maintains focus
- Coherence in content and ideas
- Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
- Appropriate and accurate format
| - Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
- Maintains focus – no digressions
- Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
- Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies
| - Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
- Not completely focused – some digressions
- Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
- Some details support the topic
- Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
| - Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
- Some focus but writing digresses
- Not always coherent in content and ideas
- Few details support the topic
- Necessary rules of format vaguely applied -Some critical oversights
| - Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text -Meaning obscure with major digressions
- Not coherent in content and ideas
- Very few details support the topic
- Necessary rules of format not applied
|
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING - Tone, register, style, purpose/effect,
- audience and context; Language use and conventions;
- Word choice; Punctuation and spelling
12 MARKS | 10–12 | 8–9 | 6–7 | 4-5 | 0–3 |
- Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Grammatically accurate and well constructed
- Virtually error-free
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Generally grammatically accurate and well-constructed
- Very good vocabulary
- Mostly free of errors
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Some grammatical errors
- Adequate vocabulary
- Errors do not impede meaning
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
- Limited vocabulary
- Meaning obscured
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
- Error-ridden and confused
- Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
- Meaning seriously impaired
|
MARK RANGE | 25–30 | 19–23 | 14-17 | 9-12 | 0–7 |
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT Response and ideas; Organisation of ideas; Features/conventions and context 12 MARKS | 10–12 | 8-9 | 6-7 | 4-5 | 0-3 |
- Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent and mature ideas
- Extensive knowledge of features of the type of text
- Writing maintains focus
- Coherence in content and ideas
- Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
- Appropriate and accurate format
| - Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
- Maintains focus – no digressions
- Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
- Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies
| - Adequate response, demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
- Not completely focused –some digressions
- Reasonably coherent in content and ideas -Some details support the topic
- Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
| - Basic response, demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
- Some focus but writing digresses
- Not always coherent in content and ideas
- Few details support the topic
- Necessary rules of format vaguely applied
- Some critical oversights
| - Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
- Meaning obscure with major digressions
- Not coherent in content and ideas
- Very few details support the topic
- Necessary rules of format not applied
|
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING - Tone, register, style, vocabulary appropriate to purpose and context; Language use and conventions;
- Word choice; Punctuation and spelling
8 MARKS | 7–8 | 5-6 | 4 | 3 | 0–2 |
- Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Grammatically accurate and well constructed
- Virtually error-free
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Generally grammatically accurate and well-constructed
- Very good vocabulary
- Mostly free of errors
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Some grammatical errors
- Adequate vocabulary
- Errors do not impede meaning
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
- Limited vocabulary
- Meaning obscured
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
- Error-ridden and confused
- Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
- Meaning seriously impaired
|
MARK RANGE | 17–20 | 13–15 | 10-11 | 7-8 | 0–5 |