ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE PAPER 3
GRADE 12
SENIOR CERTIFICATE EXAMINATIONS
MEMORANDUM
MAY/JUNE 2017
INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
This memorandum must be used together with the attached English FAL assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.
SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to write on ONE topic only.
- The ideas listed below the topics are only some ways in which the topic could be interpreted.
- Full credit must be given for the candidate’s own interpretation.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 50-mark assessment rubric to mark the essays. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
- Content and planning (30 marks)
- Language, style and editing (15 marks)
- Structure (5 marks)
NOTE: No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
1.1 You know my name, but …
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and an interesting ending.
- If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings experienced by the writer.
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, trying to use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
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1.2 My favourite destination
Narrative/Reflective Descriptive
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and an interesting ending.
- If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings experienced by the writer.
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, trying to use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
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1.3 If I were given a second chance ...
Reflective/Narrative/Descriptive
- If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings experienced by the writer.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line. This topic lends itself to the possibility of being written in both the past and the present tense. The essay must have an interesting ending.
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, trying to use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
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1.4 Nowadays there is hardly any privacy, since everything gets posted online.
Argumentative/Discursive/Reflective
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer’s opinion.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly presented in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If reflective, the candidate must still take a stance for or against the topic. Personal feelings and emotions must be evident.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
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1.5 Our age is not determined by the date on the calendar, but by the mind.
Argumentative/Discursive/Reflective
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer’s opinion.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly presented in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If reflective, the candidate must still take a stance for or against the topic. Personal feelings and emotions must be evident.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
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1.6 Happiness is a choice.
Discursive/Argumentative/Reflective
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer’s opinion.
- If reflective, feelings and emotions must be evident.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
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1.7 Interpretation of pictures
The candidate
- should give the essay a suitable title.
- may interpret the pictures in any way.
- may choose to write any type of essay, provided it is in direct relation to the picture chosen.
- may write in any appropriate tense.
1.7.1 Picture: A window
- Literal interpretations: a view from a window, home environment.
- Figurative interpretations: a window to the world, the world of opportunities, escape into a world of your own.
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1.7.2 Picture: A boy on shoulders
- Literal interpretations: parent-child relationships, a delightful experience.
- Figurative interpretations: caring, racial harmony, trust.
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TOTAL SECTION A: 50
SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 2
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 30-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
- Content, planning and format (18 marks)
- Language, style and editing (12 marks)
NOTE: No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
2.1 LETTER TO THE PRESS
A letter to the editor about road accidents
- The letter should be addressed to the editor of a newspaper.
- The letter should have an introduction, a body and a conclusion.
- The tone and register of the letter should be formal.
- Acceptable variations of the format must be allowed.
- The following aspects of format should be included:
- Address of sender
- Date
- Recipient (Editor)
- Address of newspaper
- Salutation
- Subject line
- Suitable ending
- Signature
- Name of sender
- The following information should be included in the letter, among others:
- Details of road accidents
- Expression of views and feelings about the accidents
- Suggestions about ways in which future road accidents may be avoided
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2.2 OBITUARY
An obituary of a teammate
- The tone must be formal.
- The following aspects of format should be included:
- Full name of the deceased
- Date of birth
- Date of death
- The following information may also be included:
- Birthplace
- Where the person was living at the time of death
- Key survivors
- Date, time and place of funeral
- Biographical information
- A tribute must be paid to the deceased.
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2.3 AGENDA AND MINUTES OF A MEETING
Minutes of a meeting
- The language must be concise and formal.
- Items must be numbered.
- Headings and bullets may be used.
- The minutes must be written in the past tense.
- The following aspects of format should be included:
- The name of the organisation
- The date, time and place of the meeting
- A list of people present as well as apologies tended
- A record of discussions and decisions/actions taken
- The time at which the meeting ended
- The minutes must provide a summary of what was proposed and finally agreed upon.
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2.4 DIALOGUE
A conversation between a parent/guardian and a child
- A context must be provided at the beginning of the dialogue.
The dialogue must be between the parent/guardian and a child
The tone must be informal.
- The child must convince the parent/guardian.
- The following aspects of the dialogue format must be included:
- The names of the speakers written on the left side of the page.
- A colon used after the name of the character who is speaking.
- A new line used to indicate each new speaker.
- Where necessary, actions must be given in brackets before the words are spoken.
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TOTAL SECTION B: 30
SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 3
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 20-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the attached rubric:
- Content, planning and format (12 marks)
- Language, style and editing (8 marks)
NOTE: No additional penalties may be imposed as any deviations are addressed by the rubric.
3.1 FLYER
Sale of items
- The following aspects should be included in the flyer, among others:
- Eye-catching headline or slogan
- Catchy words and phrases should be used.
- Sufficient details of the items for sale
- Your contact details
- The language may be formal or informal but not slang or colloquial.
NOTE: Do not award marks for illustrations.
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3.2 DIARY ENTRIES
The candidate’s feelings BEFORE and AFTER the first day at work
- There MUST be TWO diary entries with two different dates/times.
- The entries should express the candidate’s feelings before and after the first day of work.
- The diary entries should be written in the first person.
- The language should be simple and informal.
- The tone must reflect emotions suited to the topic.
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3.3 DIRECTIONS
Directions to the hall
- The directions may be in either point or paragraph form.
- Complete sentences are not necessary.
- Directions must be in the correct sequence, including reference to distance, turns and landmarks.
NOTE: Do not award marks for illustrations.
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TOTAL SECTION C:20
GRAND TOTAL:100
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR ESSAY – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]
Criteria | | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT & PLANNING (Response and ideas) Organisation of ideas for planning; Awareness of purpose, audience and context 30 MARKS | Upper level | 28–30 | 22–24 | 16–18 | 10–12 | 4–6 |
- Outstanding/Striking response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent, thought-provoking and mature ideas
- Exceptionally well organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion
| - Very well-crafted response
- Fully relevant and interesting ideas with evidence of maturity
- Very well organised and coherent, including
introduction, body and conclusion
| - Satisfactory response -Ideas are reasonably coherent and convincing
- Reasonably organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion
| - Inconsistently coherent response
- Unclear ideas and unoriginal
- Little evidence of organisation and coherence
| - Totally irrelevant response
- Confused and unfocused ideas
- Vague and repetitive
- Unorganised and incoherent
|
Lower level | 25–27 | 19–21 | 13–15 | 7–9 | 0–3 |
- Excellent response but lacks the exceptionally striking qualities of the outstanding essay
- Mature and intelligent ideas
- Skilfully organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion
| - Well-crafted response
- Relevant and interesting ideas
- Well organised and coherent, including
introduction, body and conclusion
| - Satisfactory response but some lapses in clarity
- Ideas are fairly coherent and convincing
- Some degree of organisation and coherence, including introduction, body and conclusion
| - Largely irrelevant response
- Ideas tend to be disconnected and confusing
- Hardly any evidence of organisation and coherence
| - No attempt to respond to the topicCompletely irrelevant and inappropriate
- Unfocused and muddled
|
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING Tone, register, style, vocabulary appropriate to purpose/effect and context; Word choice; Language use and conventions, punctuation, grammar, spelling 15 MARKS | Upper level | 14–15 | 11–12 | 8–9 | 5–6 | 0-3 |
- Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Exceptionally impressive use of language,
- Compelling and rhetorically effective in tone
- Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling
- Very skilfully crafted
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Language is effective and a consistently appropriate tone is used
- Largely error-free in grammar and spelling
- Very well crafted
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Appropriate use of language to convey meaning
- Rhetorical devices used to enhance content
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Very basic use of language
- Diction is inappropriate
- Very limited vocabulary
| - Language incomprehensible
- Tone, register, style and vocabulary not appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Vocabulary limitations so extreme as to make comprehension impossible
|
Lower level | 13 | 10 | 7 | 4 | |
- Language excellent and rhetorically effective in tone
- Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling
- Skilfully crafted
| - Language engaging and generally effective
- Appropriate and effective tone
- Few errors in grammar and spelling
- Well-crafted
| - Adequate use of language with some inconsistencies
- Tone generally appropriate and limited use of rhetorical devices
| - Inadequate use of language
- Little or no variety in sentences
- Exceptionally limited vocabulary
| |
STRUCTURE Features of text; Paragraph development and sentence construction 5 MARKS | | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 0-1 |
- Excellent development of topic
- Exceptional detail
- Sentences, paragraphs exceptionally well-constructed
| - Logical development of details
- Coherent
- Sentences, paragraphs logical, varied
| - Relevant details developed
- Sentences, paragraphs well-constructed
- Essay still makes sense
| - Some valid points
- Sentences and paragraphs faulty
- Essay still makes some sense
| - Necessary point lacking
- Sentences an paragraphs faulty
|
MARK RANGE | | 43-50 | 33-40 | 23-30 | 13-20 | 0-10 |
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT Response and ideas; Organisation of ideas for planning; Purpose, audience, features/conventions and context 18MARKS | 15-18 | 11-14 | 8-10 | 5-7 | 0-4 |
- Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent and mature ideas
- xtensive knowledge of features of the type of text
- Writing maintains focus
- Coherence in content and ideas
- Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
- Appropriate and accurate format
| - Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
- Maintains focus – no digressions
- Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
- Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies
| - Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
- Not completely focused – some digressions
- Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
- Some details support the topic
- Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
| - Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
- Some focus but writing digresses
- Not always coherent in content and ideas Few details support the topic
- Has vaguely applied necessary rules of format
- Some critical oversights
| - Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
- Meaning is obscure with major digressions
- Not coherent in content and ideas
- Very few details support the topic
- Has not applied necessary rules of format
|
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING Tone, register, style, purpose/effect, audience and context; Language use and conventions; Word choice; Punctuation and spelling 12 MARKS | 9–10 | 7–8 | 5–6 | 3–4 | 0–2 |
- Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Grammatically accurate and well-constructed
- Virtually error-free
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Generally grammatically accurate and well-constructed
- Very good vocabulary
- Mostly free of errors
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Some grammatical errors
- Adequate vocabulary
- Errors do not impede meaning
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
- Limited vocabulary
- Meaning obscured
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
- Error-ridden and confused
- Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
- Meaning seriously impaired
|
MARK RANGE | 25-30 | 19-23 | 14-17 | 9-12 | 0-7 |
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT Response and ideas; Organisation of ideas for planning; Purpose, audience, features/conventions and context 12MARKS | 10-12 | 8-9 | 6-7 | 4-5 | 0-3 |
- Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent and mature ideas
- xtensive knowledge of features of the type of text
- Writing maintains focus
- Coherence in content and ideas
- Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
- Appropriate and accurate format
| - Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
- Maintains focus – no digressions
- Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
- Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies
| - Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
- Not completely focused – some digressions
- Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
- Some details support the topic
- Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
| - Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
- Some focus but writing digresses
- Not always coherent in content and ideas Few details support the topic
- Has vaguely applied necessary rules of format
- Some critical oversights
| - Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
- Meaning is obscure with major digressions
- Not coherent in content and ideas
- Very few details support the topic
- Has not applied necessary rules of format
|
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING Tone, register, style, purpose/effect, audience and context; Language use and conventions; Word choice; Punctuation and spelling 8 MARKS | 7-8 | 5-6 | 4 | 3 | 0–2 |
- Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Grammatically accurate and well-constructed
- Virtually error-free
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Generally grammatically accurate and well-constructed
- Very good vocabulary
- Mostly free of errors
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Some grammatical errors
- Adequate vocabulary
- Errors do not impede meaning
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
- Limited vocabulary
- Meaning obscured
| - Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
- Error-ridden and confused
- Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
- Meaning seriously impaired
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MARK RANGE | 17-20 | 13-15 | 10-11 | 7-8 | 0-5 |