ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE PAPER 3
GRADE 12
NATIONAL SENIOR CERTIFICATE
MEMORANDUM
SEPTEMBER 2018

INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
This memorandum must be used in conjunction with the attached English FAL assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.
NOTE: All pieces of writing should be read at least TWICE during assessment, once for content and once for language respectively. Errors have to be indicated in your second reading.

SECTION A: ESSAY

QUESTION 1
INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS:

  • Candidates are required to write on ONE topic only.
  • The ideas listed below the topics are only some ways in which the topics can be interpreted.
  • Full credit must be given for the candidates’ own interpretation.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 50-mark grid to mark the essays. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria:
    • Content and planning (30 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (15 marks)
    • Structure (5 marks)

NOTE:

  • Adhere to the length of 250–300 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached midsentence, read to the end of that sentence.
  • No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.

1.1 Who am I?
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective essay

  • If narrative, a storyline illustrating the statement must be evident in which a series of events are shown. There must be a logical sequence of tense.
  • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an experience/incident.
  • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and feelings/emotions.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.2 That was it and I just …
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective essay

  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong storyline and an interesting ending. There must be a logical sequence of tense.
  • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an incident/experience to illustrate the statement.
  • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and feelings/emotions.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.3 Being irresponsible makes people lose out in life.
Argumentative/Discursive/Reflective/Descriptive essay

  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view.
  • If discursive, the candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay but the arguments for or against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the course of the essay.
  • If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings the learner experiences/experienced.
  • If descriptive, the learner should create the picture in words, trying to use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.4 The beauty of believing in yourself
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective essay

  • If narrative, a strong storyline illustrating the statement must be evident in which a series of events are shown. There must be a logical sequence of tense.
  • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an incident/experience to illustrate the statement.
  • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and feelings/emotions.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.5 ‘Nothing worth having in life comes without effort.’ – John C Maxwell
Discursive/Reflective/Argumentative/Descriptive essay

  • If discursive, the candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay but the arguments for or against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the course of the essay.
  • If reflective, the essay should reflect emotional reactions and feelings experienced by the candidate.
  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The learner should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the candidate’s opinion.
  • If descriptive, the learner should create a picture in words, trying to use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.6 An amazing achievement
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective Essay

  • If narrative, a strong storyline illustrating the statement must be evident in which a series of events are shown. There must be a logical sequence of tense.
  • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an incident/experience to illustrate the statement.
  • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and feelings/emotions.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.7 Interpretation of pictures

  • The candidate may interpret the picture in any way.
  • The candidate may choose to write any type of essay.
  • The interpretation must be linked to the pictures.
  • The candidate should give the essay a suitable title.
  • The candidate may write in any appropriate tense.
  • The following ideas, among others, may be explored in response to the pictures:

1.7.1 A picture of stairs

  • Literal interpretations: e.g. climbing up, going down, ascending to success etc.
  • Abstract interpretations: e.g. rising from the ashes, achieving success, retrogression etc. [50]

1.7.2 A picture of a zebra

  • Literal interpretations: e.g. wildlife, the big five, the animal kingdom etc.
  • Abstract interpretations: e.g. beauty of nature, the environment, animal welfare etc. [50]

TOTAL SECTION A: 50

SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 2
INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS:

  • Learners are required to answer ONE question.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 30-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by learners must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
  • Content, planning and format (18 marks)
  • Language, style and editing (12 marks)

NOTE:

  • Adhere to the length of 120–150 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid-sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
  • No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.

2.1 FORMAL LETTER TO THE PRESS
A letter expressing concerns about environmental destruction

  • Acceptable variations of format must be allowed.
  • The letter should be addressed to the editor of the Daily Dispatch.
  • The tone and register of the letter should be formal.
  • The following aspects of format should be included:
    • Address of sender
    • Date
    • Recipient (editor of Daily Dispatch)
    • Address of Daily Dispatch
    • Salutation
    • Subject line
    • Suitable ending
    • Signature
    • Name of sender [30]

2.2 CURRICULUM VITAE (CV) AND COVERING LETTER
A covering letter for a job application

  • The curriculum vitae (CV) should be short and relevant to the job applied for.
  • The letter should be addressed to the manager of a marketing company.
  • The tone and register of the letter should be formal.
  • The following aspects of format should be included:
    • Address of sender
    • Date
    • Recipient (Manager of marketing company)
    • Address of recipient
    • Salutation
    • Subject line
    • Suitable ending
    • Signature
    • Name of sender [30]

2.3 INFORMAL REPORT
A report about the successes and challenges of the women and child abuse
awareness campaign

  • The report must have:
    • A topic
    • A sender
    • Date
    • The format is informal but the language should be formal.
    • Slang or colloquial language is unacceptable.

2.4 SPEECH
A speech to wish a learner well for a sports competition

  • The speech should be written using a suitable salutation/greeting.
  • The tone and register should be appropriate for the audience.
  • The speech must include the following:
    • An introduction that attracts attention
    • Well-developed points
    • A conclusion

[30]
TOTAL SECTION B: 30

SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 3
INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS:

  • Learners are required to answer ONE question.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 20-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by learners must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
    • Content, planning and format (12 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (8 marks)

NOTE:

  • Adhere to the length of 80–100 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid-sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
  • No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.

3.1 INVITATION CARD
An invitation to honour the elderly people

  • The following aspects of format must be included:
    • The name of the occasion
    • Date, venue and time
    • Type of function should be clear
  • Language should be formal and suitable for the context.
  • Full sentences are not necessary.
  • Do not award marks for drawings and illustrations. [20]

3.2 DIARY ENTRY
The learner’s feelings before and after the interview

  • There should be TWO entries.
  • The entries should be written in the first person.
  • Each entry must bear a date/time.
  • The tone must be personal. [20]

3.3 INSTRUCTIONS
Instructions on protective measures against social networking crimes/cyber crime

  • Instructions may be in point or paragraph form.
  • Numbers or bullets may be used to indicate each new instruction.
  • The language should be clear and instructive.
  • Complete sentences are not necessary.
  • Instructions should be logical. [20]

TOTAL SECTION C: 20
GRAND TOTAL: 100

SECTION A: RUBRIC FOR ASSESSING ESSAY – ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]

  • Always use the rubric when marking the creative essay (Paper 3, SECTION A).
  • The marks from 0–50 have been divided into 5 major level descriptors.
  • In the Content, Language and Style criteria, each of the five level descriptors is divided into an upper and a lower level sub-category with the applicable mark range and descriptors.
  • Structure is not affected by the upper level and lower level division.

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR ESSAY – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]

Criteria    Exceptional  Skilful  Moderate  Elementary  Inadequate 
CONTENT & PLANNING
(Response and ideas)
Organisation of ideas for planning;
Awareness of purpose, audience and context
30 MARKS  
Upper level  28–30  22–24  16–18  10–12  4–6
  • Outstanding/Striking response beyond normal expectations
  • Intelligent, thought-provoking and mature ideas
  • Exceptionally well organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion
  • Very well-crafted response
  • Fully relevant and interesting ideas with evidence of maturity
  • Very well organised and coherent, including
    introduction, body and conclusion
  • Satisfactory response -Ideas are reasonably coherent and convincing
  • Reasonably organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion
  • Inconsistently coherent response
  • Unclear ideas and unoriginal
  • Little evidence of organisation and coherence
  • Totally irrelevant response
  • Confused and unfocused ideas
  • Vague and repetitive
  • Unorganised and incoherent
Lower level  25–27  19–21 13–15  7–9 0–3 
  • Excellent response but lacks the exceptionally striking qualities of the outstanding essay
  • Mature and intelligent ideas
  • Skilfully organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion 
  • Well-crafted response
  • Relevant and interesting ideas
  • Well organised and coherent, including
    introduction, body and conclusion 
  • Satisfactory response but some lapses in clarity
  • Ideas are fairly coherent and convincing
  • Some degree of organisation and coherence, including introduction, body and conclusion
  • Largely irrelevant response
  • Ideas tend to be disconnected and confusing
  • Hardly any evidence of organisation and coherence
  • No attempt to respond to the topicCompletely irrelevant and inappropriate
  • Unfocused and muddled
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING
Tone, register, style, vocabulary appropriate to purpose/effect and context;
Word choice;
Language use and conventions, punctuation, grammar, spelling
15 MARKS    
Upper level 14–15  11–12  8–9  5–6  0-3
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Exceptionally impressive use of language,
  • Compelling and rhetorically effective in tone
  • Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling
  • Very skilfully crafted
  •  Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Language is effective and a consistently appropriate tone is used
  • Largely error-free in grammar and spelling
  • Very well crafted
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Appropriate use of language to convey meaning
  • Rhetorical devices used to enhance content
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Very basic use of language
  • Diction is inappropriate
  • Very limited vocabulary
  • Language incomprehensible
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary not appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Vocabulary limitations so extreme as to make comprehension impossible
Lower level  13 10 7 4  
  • Language excellent and rhetorically effective in tone
  • Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling
  • Skilfully crafted 
  • Language engaging and generally effective
  • Appropriate and effective tone
  • Few errors in grammar and spelling
  • Well-crafted 
  • Adequate use of language with some inconsistencies
  • Tone generally appropriate and limited use of rhetorical devices
  • Inadequate use of language
  • Little or no variety in sentences
  • Exceptionally limited vocabulary
 
STRUCTURE
Features of text;
Paragraph development and sentence
construction
5 MARKS
  5 4 3 2 0-1
  • Excellent development of topic
  • Exceptional detail
  • Sentences, paragraphs exceptionally well-constructed
  • Logical development of details
  • Coherent
  • Sentences, paragraphs logical, varied
  • Relevant details developed
  • Sentences, paragraphs well-constructed
  • Essay still makes sense
  • Some valid points
  • Sentences and paragraphs faulty
  • Essay still makes some sense
  • Necessary point lacking
  • Sentences an paragraphs faulty
    • Essay lacks sense


SECTION B: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]

Criteria  Exceptional  Skilful  Moderate  Elementary  Inadequate 
CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT
Response and ideas;
Organisation of ideas for planning;
Purpose, audience, features/conventions and context
18MARKS 
 15-18 11-14 8-10 5-7 0-4
  • Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
  • Intelligent and mature ideas
  • xtensive knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Writing maintains focus
  • Coherence in content and ideas
  • Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
  • Appropriate and accurate format
  • Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Maintains focus – no digressions
  • Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
  • Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies 
  • Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Not completely focused – some digressions
  • Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
  • Some details support the topic
  • Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
  • Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Some focus but writing digresses
  • Not always coherent in content and ideas Few details support the topic
  • Has vaguely applied necessary rules of format
  • Some critical oversights 
  • Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Meaning is obscure with major digressions
  • Not coherent in content and ideas
  • Very few details support the topic
  • Has not applied necessary rules of format
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING
Tone, register, style, purpose/effect, audience and context;
Language use and conventions;
Word choice;
Punctuation and spelling
12 MARKS  
10-12 8-9 6-7 4-5  0–3
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Grammatically accurate and well-constructed
  • Virtually error-free 
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Generally grammatically accurate and well-constructed
  • Very good vocabulary
  • Mostly free of errors
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Some grammatical errors
  • Adequate vocabulary
  • Errors do not impede meaning
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
  • Limited vocabulary
  • Meaning obscured
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
  • Error-ridden and confused
    • Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
  • Meaning seriously impaired
MARK RANGE 25-30 19-23 14-17 9-12 0-7

 

SECTION C: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]

Criteria  Exceptional  Skilful  Moderate  Elementary  Inadequate 
CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT
Response and ideas;
Organisation of ideas for planning;
Purpose, audience, features/conventions and context
12MARKS 
 10-12 8-9 6-7 4-5 0-3
  • Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
  • Intelligent and mature ideas
  • Extensive knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Writing maintains focus
  • Coherence in content and ideas
  • Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
  • Appropriate and accurate format
  • Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Maintains focus – no digressions
  • Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
  • Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies 
  • Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Not completely focused – some digressions
  • Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
  • Some details support the topic
  • Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
  • Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Some focus but writing digresses
  • Not always coherent in content and ideas Few details support the topic
  • Has vaguely applied necessary rules of format
  • Some critical oversights 
  • Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Meaning is obscure with major digressions
  • Not coherent in content and ideas
  • Very few details support the topic
  • Has not applied necessary rules of format
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING
Tone, register, style, purpose/effect, audience and context;
Language use and conventions;
Word choice;
Punctuation and spelling
8 MARKS  
 7-8 5-6 4 3  0–2
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Grammatically accurate and well-constructed
  • Virtually error-free 
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Generally grammatically accurate and well-constructed
  • Very good vocabulary
  • Mostly free of errors
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Some grammatical errors
  • Adequate vocabulary
  • Errors do not impede meaning
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
  • Limited vocabulary
  • Meaning obscured
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
  • Error-ridden and confused
  • Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
    • Meaning seriously impaired
MARK RANGE 17-20 13-15 10-11 7-8 0-5
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