ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE
PAPER 3
GRADE 12
NSC EXAMS
PAST PAPERS AND MEMOS NOVEMBER 2018
INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
This memorandum must be used together with the attached English FAL assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.
MEMORANDUM
SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to write on ONE topic only.
- The ideas listed below the topics are only some ways in which the topic could be interpreted.
- Full credit must be given for the candidate's own interpretation.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 50-mark assessment rubric to mark the essays. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
- Content and planning (30 marks)
- Language, style and editing (15 marks)
- Structure (5 marks)
NOTE:
- Adhere to the length of between 250 and 300 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid-sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
- No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
1.1 Everything was going according to plan when …
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and an interesting ending.
- If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings the candidate experiences/experienced.
- If descriptive, the writer should create a picture in words using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.2 'We can change the world and make it a better place. It is in your hands to make a difference.' – Nelson Mandela
Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive/Narrative
- If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings the candidate experiences/experienced.
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and an interesting ending.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.3 Hidden treasure
Descriptive/Narrative/Reflective
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and an interesting ending.
- If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings the candidate experiences/experienced.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.4 'Go for it now. The future is promised to no-one.' – Dr Wayne Dyer
Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive/Narrative
- If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings the candidate experiences/experienced.
- If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and an interesting ending.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.5 You do not need someone else's approval to feel good about yourself.
Argumentative/ Discursive/Reflective
- If argumentative, the essay must convey a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
- If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
- If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings the candidate experiences/experienced.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.6 Beyond these walls
Descriptive/Narrative/Reflective
- If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
- If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and an interesting ending.
- If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings the candidate experiences/experienced.
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay/any other essay type. [50]
1.7 Interpretation of pictures
The candidate:
- must give the essay a suitable title.
- may interpret the pictures in any way, relevant to the picture.
- may choose to write any type of essay, relevant to the picture.
- must link the interpretation to the picture.
- may write in any appropriate tense.
1.7.1 Picture: Computer
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive
- Literal interpretations: Communicating electronically, use of computers, working in an office, electronic learning.
- Figurative interpretations: the effects of technology on our lives, modern life, the world of work. [50]
1.7.2 Picture: Lion
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive
- Literal interpretations: lions as an endangered species, king of the jungle, wildlife.
- Figurative interpretations: survival of the fittest, law of the jungle, power, fear. [50]
TOTAL SECTION A: 50
SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 2
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 30-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
- Content, planning and format (18 marks)
- Language, style and editing (12 marks)
NOTE:
- Adhere to the length of between 120 and 150 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid-sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
- No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
2.1 DIALOGUE
A conversation between siblings.
- A brief context must be provided at the beginning of the dialogue.
- The dialogue must be between the siblings.
- The tone must be informal.
- The following aspects of the dialogue format must be included:
- The names of the speakers written on the left side of the page.
- A colon after the name of the character who is speaking.
- A new line to indicate each new speaker.
- Where necessary, actions must be given in brackets before the words are spoken. [30]
2.2 OBITUARY
A learner has recently passed away.
- The tone must be formal.
- The following aspects of format must be included:
- Full name of the deceased
- Date of birth
- Date of death
- Birthplace
- Where the person was living at the time of death
- Key survivors (e.g. parents, siblings) and their names
- The following information may be included:
- Date, time and place of funeral
- Biographical information
- Cause of death.
- The obituary must pay tribute to the deceased. [30]
2.3 NEWSPAPER ARTICLE
An article for a community newspaper.
- The article must have a suitable heading.
- Paragraphs should not be too long.
- The style should be personal, addressing the reader.
- The language may be formal.
- The article should be stimulating to the reader/encourage the reader to recycle.
- The article must provide the reader with suggestions on how residents can recycle at home. [30]
2.4 FORMAL LETTER
Complaint to the manager.
- Allow for acceptable variations of the format, e.g. addresses.
- The letter must be addressed to the manager of the store.
- The tone and register of the letter must be formal.
- The letter must include an introduction, a body and a conclusion.
- The following aspects of format must be included:
- Address of sender
- Date
- Recipient: The Manager
- Address of recipient
- Greeting/Salutation
- Subject line
- Suitable ending
- Signature
- Name of sender
- The following information must be included in the letter, among others:
- Details about the purchase of the garment
- Dissatisfaction with the service [30]
TOTAL SECTION B: 30
SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 3
Instructions to Markers:
- Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
- Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
- Use the 20-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
- Content, planning and format (12 marks)
- Language, style and editing (8 marks)
NOTE:
- Adhere to the length of between 80 and 100 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid-sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
- No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
3.1 FLYER
Service to the elderly
- The following aspects should be included in the flyer, among others:
- Eye-catching headline or slogan
- Catchy words and phrases
- Sufficient details of services offered
- Contact details of the person offering the service
- The language may be formal or informal but not slang or colloquial.
NOTE: Do NOT award marks for illustrations or drawings. [20]
3.2 DIARY ENTRIES
The candidate's feelings BEFORE and AFTER informing his/her family of the decision taken.
- There MUST be TWO diary entries with two different dates/times.
- The entries must express the candidate's feelings before and after informing his/her family.
- The diary entries should be written in the first person.
- The language should be simple and informal.
- The tone must reflect suitable emotions. [20]
3.3 DIRECTIONS
Directions to the clinic
- The directions may be in either point or paragraph form.
- Complete sentences are not necessary.
- Directions must be in the correct chronological order.
- Approximate distance, turns and landmarks must be included.
NOTE: Do NOT award marks for illustrations. [20]
TOTAL SECTION C: 20
GRAND TOTAL: 100
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR ESSAY – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]
Criteria
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Exceptional
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Skilful
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Moderate
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Elementary
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Inadequate
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CONTENT & PLANNING
(Response and ideas) Organisation of ideas for planning;
Awareness of purpose, audience and context
30 MARKS
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UPPER LEVEL
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28–30
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22–24
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16–18
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10-12
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4-6
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- Outstanding/Striking response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent, thought-provoking and mature ideas
- Exceptionally well organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
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- Very well-crafted response
- Fully relevant and interesting ideas with evidence of maturity
- Very well organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
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- Satisfactory response
- Ideas are reasonably coherent and convincing
- Reasonably organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
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- Inconsistently coherent response
- Unclear ideas and unoriginal
- Little evidence of organisation and coherence
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- Totally irrelevant response
- Confused and unfocused ideas
- Vague and repetitive
- Unorganised and incoherent
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LOWER LEVEL
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25–27
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19–21
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13–15
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7–9
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0–3
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- Excellent response but lacks the exceptionally striking qualities of the outstanding essay
- Mature and intelligent ideas
- Skilfully organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion/ending
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- Well-crafted response
- Relevant and interesting ideas
- Well organised and coherent (connected), including introduction, body and conclusion
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- Satisfactory response but some lapses in clarity
- Ideas are fairly coherent and convincing
- Some degree of organisation and coherence, including introduction, body and conclusion
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- Largely irrelevant response -Ideas tend to be disconnected and confusing
- Hardly any evidence of organisation and coherence
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- No attempt to respond to the topic
- Completely irrelevant and inappropriate
- Unfocused and muddled
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LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING
Tone, register, style, vocabulary appropriate to purpose/effect and context;
Word choice; Language use and conventions, punctuation, grammar, spelling
15 MARKS
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UPPER LEVEL
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14–15
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11-12
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8- 9
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5- 6
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0 – 3
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Language confident, exceptionally impressive
- Compelling and rhetorically effective in tone
- Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling
- Very skilfully crafted
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Language is effective and a consistently appropriate tone is used
- Largely error-free in grammar and spelling
- Very well crafted
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Appropriate use of language to convey meaning
- Tone is appropriate
- Rhetorical devices used to enhance content
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Very basic use of language
- Tone and diction are inappropriate
- Very limited vocabulary
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- Language incomprehensible
- Tone, register, style and vocabulary not appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- ocabulary limitations so extreme as to make comprehension impossible
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LOWER LEVEL
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13
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10
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7
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4
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- Language excellent and rhetorically effective in tone
- irtually error-free in grammar and spelling
- Skilfully crafted
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- Language engaging and generally effective
- Appropriate and effective tone
- Few errors in grammar and spelling
-Well crafted
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- Adequate use of language with some inconsistencies
- Tone generally appropriate and limited use of rhetorical devices
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- Inadequate use of language
- Little or no variety in sentence
- Exceptionally limited vocabulary
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STRUCTURE
Features of text;
Paragraph development and sentence construction
5 MARKS
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5
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4
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3
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2
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0–1
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- Excellent development of topic
- Exceptional detail
- Sentences, paragraphs exceptionally well-constructed
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- Logical development of details
- Coherent
- Sentences, paragraphs logical, varied
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- Relevant details developed
- Sentences, paragraphs well constructed
- Essay still makes sense
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- Some valid points
- Sentences and paragraphs faulty
- Essay still makes some sense
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- Necessary points lacking
- Sentences and paragraphs faulty
- Essay lacks sense
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ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]
Criteria
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Exceptional
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Skilful
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Moderate
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Elementary
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Inadequate
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CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT
Response and ideas; Organisation of ideas for planning;
Purpose, audience, features/conventions and context
18 MARKS
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15–18
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11-14
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8-10
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5-7
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0–4
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- Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent and mature ideas
- Extensive knowledge of features of the type of text
- Writing maintains focus
- Coherence in content and ideas
- Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
- Appropriate and accurate format
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- Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
- Maintains focus – no digressions
- Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
- Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies
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- Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
- Not completely focused – some digressions
- Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
- Some details support the topic
- Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
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- Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
- Some focus but writing digresses
- Not always coherent in content and ideas
- Few details support the topic
- Necessary rules of format vaguely applied -Some critical oversights
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- Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text -Meaning obscure with major digressions
- Not coherent in content and ideas
- Very few details support the topic
- Necessary rules of format not applied
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LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING
Tone, register, style, purpose/effect,
audience and context; Language use and conventions;
Word choice; Punctuation and spelling
12 MARKS
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10–12
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8–9
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6–7
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4-5
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0–3
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Grammatically accurate and well constructed
- Virtually error-free
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Generally grammatically accurate and well-constructed
- Very good vocabulary
- Mostly free of errors
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Some grammatical errors
- Adequate vocabulary
- Errors do not impede meaning
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
- Limited vocabulary
- Meaning obscured
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
- Error-ridden and confused
- Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
- Meaning seriously impaired
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MARK RANGE
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25–30
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19–23
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14-17
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9-12
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0–7
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ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]
Criteria
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Exceptional
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Skilful
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Moderate
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Elementary
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Inadequate
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CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT
Response and ideas; Organisation of ideas; Features/conventions and context
12 MARKS
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10–12
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8-9
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6-7
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4-5
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0-3
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- Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
- Intelligent and mature ideas
- Extensive knowledge of features of the type of text
- Writing maintains focus
- Coherence in content and ideas
- Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
- Appropriate and accurate format
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- Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
- Maintains focus – no digressions
- Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
- Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies
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- Adequate response, demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
- Not completely focused –some digressions
- Reasonably coherent in content and ideas -Some details support the topic
- Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
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- Basic response, demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
- Some focus but writing digresses
- Not always coherent in content and ideas
- Few details support the topic
- Necessary rules of format vaguely applied
- Some critical oversights
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- Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
- Meaning obscure with major digressions
- Not coherent in content and ideas
- Very few details support the topic
- Necessary rules of format not applied
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LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING
Tone, register, style, vocabulary appropriate to purpose and context; Language use and conventions;
Word choice; Punctuation and spelling
8 MARKS
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7–8
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5-6
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4
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3
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0–2
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Grammatically accurate and well constructed
- Virtually error-free
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Generally grammatically accurate and well-constructed
- Very good vocabulary
- Mostly free of errors
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Some grammatical errors
- Adequate vocabulary
- Errors do not impede meaning
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
- Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
- Limited vocabulary
- Meaning obscured
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- Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
- Error-ridden and confused
- Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
- Meaning seriously impaired
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MARK RANGE
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17–20
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13–15
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10-11
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7-8
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0–5
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