ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE PAPER 3
GRADE 12
NOVEMBER 2020
MEMORANDUM
NATIONAL SENIOR CERTIFICATE

INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
These marking guidelines must be used together with the attached English FAL assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.

SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1

Instructions to Markers:

  • Candidates are required to write on ONE topic only.
  • The ideas listed below the topics are only some ways in which the topic could be interpreted.
  • Full credit must be given for the candidates' own interpretation.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 50-mark assessment rubric to mark the essays. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
    • Content and planning (30 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (15 marks)
    • Structure (5 marks)

NOTE:

  • Adhere to the length of 250–300 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
  • No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.

1.1 My family, my life
Descriptive/Narrative/ Reflective

  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.
  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.2 Later can easily become never.
Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive/Narrative

  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
  • If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.3 It was a wrong assumption.
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive

  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.4 It was a season of …
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive

  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.5 'You cannot change how people treat you or what they say about you. All you can do is change how you react to it' – Mahatma Gandhi.
Reflective/ Argumentative/Discursive/Narrative/Descriptive

  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.
  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
  • If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and a captivating ending.
  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, using as many senses as possible to make the description clear.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.6 There is more to education than just a certificate.
Argumentative/Discursive/Reflective

  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer's opinion.
  • If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
  • If reflective, the essay should convey the writer's/candidate's reactions and feelings.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.7 Interpretation of pictures

  • The candidate should give the essay a suitable title.
  • The candidate may interpret the pictures in any way.
  • The candidate may choose to write any type of essay.
  • The interpretation must be linked to the picture.
  • The candidate may write in any appropriate tense.

1.7.1 Picture: A coin
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive

  • Literal interpretations: saving money, finance, cost of living, money, crop farming and profits.
  • Figurative interpretations: the effects of money on our lives, planning for the future, materialism.
    [50]

1.7.2 Picture: Boys playing
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive

  • Literal interpretations: playtime, friendship, fun, childhood.
  • Figurative interpretations: innocence, childhood, memories, creativity, innovation, teamwork.

[50]
TOTAL SECTION A: 50

SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 2

Instructions to Markers:

  • Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 30-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
    • Content, planning and format (18 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (12 marks)

NOTE:

  • Adhere to the length of 120–150 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
  • No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.

2.1 FORMAL LETTER
A letter to thank the manager.

  • Allow for acceptable variations of the format.
  • The letter should be addressed to the manager of a local supermarket.
  • The tone and register of the letter should be formal.
  • The letter should have an introduction, a body and a conclusion.
  • The following aspects of format must be included:
    • Address of sender
    • Date
    • Recipient: The Manager
    • Address of recipient
    • Greeting/Salutation
    • Subject line
    • Suitable ending
    • Signature
    • Name of sender
  • The letter must include details showing appreciation and gratitude to the manager.
    [30]

2.2 DIALOGUE
A conversation between siblings.

  • A brief context must be provided at the beginning of the dialogue.
  • The dialogue must be between the siblings.
  • The tone must be informal.
  • The following aspects of the dialogue format must be included:
    • The names of the speakers written on the left side of the page.
    • A colon used after the name of the character who is speaking.
    • A new line used to indicate each new speaker.
    • Where necessary, actions must be given in brackets before the words are spoken.
      [30]

2.3 OBITUARY
Your brother-in-law has recently passed away.

  • The tone must be formal.
  • The following aspects of format must be included:
    • Full name of the deceased
    • Date of birth
    • Date of death
    • Birthplace
    • Where the person was living at the time of death
    • Key survivors (spouse, children) and their names
    • Date, time and place of funeral
  • Biographical information may also be included.
  • A tribute must be paid to the deceased.
    [30]

2.4 MAGAZINE ARTICLE
An article for a local magazine giving career advice.

  • The article must have a suitable heading.
  • It must have clearly defined paragraphs.
  • It must provide advice to the reader on careers.
  • The style should be personal, speaking directly to the reader.
  • The language may be formal.
  • The article should be stimulating to the reader.
    [30]

TOTAL SECTION B: 30

SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 3

Instructions to Markers:

  • Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 20-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the attached rubric:
    • Content, planning and format (12 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (8 marks)

NOTE:

  • Adhere to the length of 80–100 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid- sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
  • No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.

3.1 DIARY ENTRIES
The candidate's feelings before and after the friend's visit.

  • There MUST be TWO diary entries with two different dates/ times.
  • The first entry must express the candidate's feelings before the friend's visit and the second entry must express the candidate's feelings after the friend's visit.
  • Reference must be made to the gift either implicitly or explicitly.
  • The diary entries must be written in the first person.
  • The language must be simple and informal.
  • The tone must reflect suitable emotions.
    [20]

3.2 ADVERTISEMENT
The sale of a bicycle.

  • The advertisement must:
    • Have a catchy headline to attract the attention of the reader.
    • Inspire action.
    • Create interest in and the desire for the advertised item.
    • Have the following details: a description of the bicycle, (the cost involved) and the contact details of the seller.
  • The target market should be clear.
  • The language may be formal or informal but not slang or colloquial.

NOTE: Do not award marks for illustrations.
[20]

3.3 DIRECTIONS
Directions to the sports stadium

  • The directions may be in either point or paragraph form.
  • Complete sentences are not necessary.
  • Directions must be in the correct chronological order.
  • Landmarks, distances and turns must be included.
    [20]

TOTAL SECTION C:20
GRAND TOTAL: 100

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR ESSAY – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]

Criteria 

 

Exceptional 

Skilful 

Moderate 

Elementary 

Inadequate

CONTENT &  PLANNING 

  • (Response and ideas) Organisation of ideas for  planning; 
  • Awareness of purpose,  audience and context 

30 MARKS

UPPER LEVEL

28–30 

22–24 

16–18 

10-12 

4-6

  • Outstanding/Striking response  beyond normal expectations
  • Intelligent, thought-provoking  and mature ideas 
  • Exceptionally well organised  and coherent (connected),  including introduction, body and  conclusion/ending
  • Very well-crafted response
  • Fully relevant and interesting  ideas with evidence of  maturity
  • Very well organised and coherent (connected),  including introduction, body and  conclusion/ending
  • Satisfactory response 
  • Ideas are reasonably coherent  and convincing
  • Reasonably organised and  coherent, including introduction,  body and conclusion/ending
  • Inconsistently coherent  response 
  • Unclear ideas and unoriginal
  • Little evidence of organisation  and coherence
  • Totally irrelevant response
  • Confused and unfocused ideas
  • Vague and repetitive
  • Unorganised and incoherent

LOWER LEVEL

25–27 

19–21 

13–15 

7–9 

0–3

  • Excellent response but lacks  the exceptionally striking  qualities of the outstanding  essay
  • Mature and intelligent ideas 
  • Skilfully organised and coherent  (connected), including  introduction, body and  conclusion/ending
  • Well-crafted response
  • Relevant and interesting  ideas
  • Well organised and coherent  (connected), including  introduction, body and  conclusion
  • Satisfactory response but some  lapses in clarity
  • Ideas are fairly coherent and  convincing
  • Some degree of organisation  and coherence, including  introduction, body and  conclusion
  • Largely irrelevant response -Ideas tend to be  disconnected and confusing
  • Hardly any evidence of  organisation and coherence
  • No attempt to respond to the  topic
  • Completely irrelevant and  inappropriate
  • Unfocused and muddled

LANGUAGE, STYLE &  EDITING 

  • Tone, register, style,  vocabulary appropriate  to purpose/effect and  context; 
  • Word choice; Language use and  conventions,  punctuation, grammar,  spelling 

15 MARKS

UPPER LEVEL

14–15 

11-12 

8- 9 

5- 6 

0 – 3

  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary highly appropriate to  purpose, audience and context
  • Language confident,  exceptionally impressive 
  • Compelling and rhetorically  effective in tone 
  • Virtually error-free in grammar  and spelling 
  • Very skilfully crafted
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary very appropriate to  purpose, audience and  context
  • Language is effective and a  consistently appropriate tone  is used
  • Largely error-free in grammar  and spelling
  • Very well crafted
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary appropriate to  purpose, audience and context
  • Appropriate use of language to  convey meaning
  • Tone is appropriate
  • Rhetorical devices used to  enhance content 
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Very basic use of language
  • Tone and diction are  inappropriate
  • Very limited vocabulary
  • Language incomprehensible
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary not appropriate to  purpose, audience and context
  • ocabulary limitations so  extreme as to make  comprehension impossible

LOWER LEVEL

13 

10 

4

 
  • Language excellent and  rhetorically effective in tone
  • irtually error-free in grammar  and spelling
  • Skilfully crafted
  • Language engaging and  generally effective
  • Appropriate and effective  tone
  • Few errors in grammar and  spelling  

-Well crafted

  • Adequate use of language with  some inconsistencies
  • Tone generally appropriate and  limited use of rhetorical devices
  • Inadequate use of language
  • Little or no variety in sentence
  • Exceptionally limited  vocabulary

STRUCTURE 

  • Features of text; 
  • Paragraph development  and sentence construction 

5 MARKS

 

0–1

  • Excellent development of topic
  • Exceptional detail
  • Sentences, paragraphs  exceptionally well-constructed
  • Logical development of  details
  • Coherent
  • Sentences, paragraphs  logical, varied
  • Relevant details developed
  • Sentences, paragraphs well constructed
  • Essay still makes sense
  • Some valid points
  • Sentences and paragraphs  faulty 
  • Essay still makes some sense
  • Necessary points lacking
  • Sentences and paragraphs  faulty
  • Essay lacks sense

 

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]

Criteria 

Exceptional 

Skilful 

Moderate 

Elementary 

Inadequate

CONTENT, PLANNING  & FORMAT 

  • Response and ideas; Organisation of ideas  for planning; 
  • Purpose, audience,  features/conventions  and context 

18 MARKS

15–18 

11-14 

8-10 

5-7 

0–4

  • Outstanding response  beyond normal  expectations
  • Intelligent and mature  ideas
  • Extensive knowledge  of features of the type of  text 
  • Writing maintains focus
  • Coherence in content  and ideas
  • Highly elaborated and  all details support the  topic
  • Appropriate and  accurate format
  • Very good response  demonstrating good  knowledge of features  of the type of text 
  • Maintains focus – no  digressions
  • Coherent in content  and ideas, very well  elaborated and details  support topic
  • Appropriate format with  minor inaccuracies
  • Adequate response  demonstrating  knowledge of features  of the type of text
  • Not completely focused  – some digressions
  • Reasonably coherent  in content and ideas
  • Some details support  the topic
  • Generally appropriate  format but with some  inaccuracies
  • Basic response  demonstrating some  knowledge of features  of the type of text
  • Some focus but writing  digresses
  • Not always coherent in  content and ideas
  • Few details support the  topic
  • Necessary rules of  format vaguely applied -Some critical  oversights
  • Response reveals no  knowledge of features  of the type of text -Meaning obscure with  major digressions
  • Not coherent in content  and ideas
  • Very few details  support the topic
  • Necessary rules of  format not applied

LANGUAGE, STYLE &  EDITING 

  • Tone, register, style,  purpose/effect,  
  • audience and context; Language use and  conventions; 
  • Word choice; Punctuation and  spelling 

12 MARKS

10–12 

8–9 

6–7 

4-5 

0–3

  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary highly  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context
  • Grammatically  accurate and well constructed
  • Virtually error-free
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary very  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context
  • Generally  grammatically accurate  and well-constructed
  • Very good vocabulary 
  • Mostly free of errors
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context
  • Some grammatical  errors
  • Adequate vocabulary
  • Errors do not impede meaning
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary less  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context
  • Inaccurate grammar  with numerous errors
  • Limited vocabulary
  • Meaning obscured 
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary do not  correspond to purpose,  audience and context 
  • Error-ridden and  confused
  • Vocabulary not suitable  for purpose
  • Meaning seriously  impaired

MARK RANGE 

25–30 

19–23 

14-17 

9-12 

0–7

 

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]

Criteria 

Exceptional 

Skilful 

Moderate 

Elementary 

Inadequate

CONTENT, PLANNING  & FORMAT 

Response and ideas; Organisation of ideas;  Features/conventions and context 

12 MARKS

10–12 

8-9 

6-7 

4-5 

0-3

  • Outstanding response  beyond normal  expectations
  • Intelligent and mature  ideas
  • Extensive knowledge  of features of the type of  text 
  • Writing maintains focus
  • Coherence in content  and ideas
  • Highly elaborated and  all details support the  topic
  • Appropriate and  accurate format
  • Very good response  demonstrating good  knowledge of features  of the type of text
  • Maintains focus – no  digressions
  • Coherent in content  and ideas, very well  elaborated and details  support topic
  • Appropriate format with  minor inaccuracies
  • Adequate response,  demonstrating  knowledge of features  of the type of text
  • Not completely focused –some digressions
  • Reasonably coherent  in content and ideas -Some details support  the topic
  • Generally appropriate  format but with some  inaccuracies
  • Basic response,  demonstrating some  knowledge of features  of the type of text
  • Some focus but writing  digresses
  • Not always coherent in  content and ideas 
  • Few details support the  topic
  • Necessary rules of  format vaguely applied
  • Some critical  oversights
  • Response reveals no  knowledge of features  of the type of text
  • Meaning obscure with  major digressions
  • Not coherent in content  and ideas 
  • Very few details  support the topic
  • Necessary rules of  format not applied

LANGUAGE, STYLE &  EDITING 

  • Tone, register, style,  vocabulary appropriate  to purpose and context; Language use and  conventions; 
  • Word choice; Punctuation and  spelling 

8 MARKS

7–8 

5-6 

0–2

  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary highly  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context
  • Grammatically  accurate and well constructed
  • Virtually error-free
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary very  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context
  • Generally  grammatically accurate  and well-constructed
  • Very good vocabulary 
  • Mostly free of errors
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context
  • Some grammatical  errors
  • Adequate vocabulary
  • Errors do not impede  meaning
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary less  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context
  • Inaccurate grammar  with numerous errors
  • Limited vocabulary
  • Meaning obscured 
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary do not  correspond to purpose,  audience and context
  • Error-ridden and  confused
  • Vocabulary not suitable  for purpose
  • Meaning seriously  impaired

MARK RANGE 

17–20 

13–15 

10-11 

7-8 

0–5

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