ENGLISH FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE PAPER 3
GRADE 12
SENIOR CERTIFICATE EXAMINATIONS
MEMORANDUM
MAY/JUNE 2017

INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
This memorandum must be used together with the attached English FAL assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.
SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1
Instructions to Markers:

  • Candidates are required to write on ONE topic only.
  • The ideas listed below the topics are only some ways in which the topic could be interpreted.
  • Full credit must be given for the candidate’s own interpretation.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 50-mark assessment rubric to mark the essays. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
    • Content and planning (30 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (15 marks)
    • Structure (5 marks)

NOTE: No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
1.1 You know my name, but …
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive

  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and an interesting ending.
  • If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings experienced by the writer.
  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, trying to use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.2 My favourite destination
Narrative/Reflective Descriptive

  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line and an interesting ending.
  • If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings experienced by the writer.
  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, trying to use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.3 If I were given a second chance ...
Reflective/Narrative/Descriptive

  • If reflective, the essay should convey emotional reactions and feelings experienced by the writer.
  • If narrative, the essay must have a strong story line. This topic lends itself to the possibility of being written in both the past and the present tense. The essay must have an interesting ending.
  • If descriptive, the candidate should create a picture in words, trying to use as many senses as possible to make the description clear.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.4 Nowadays there is hardly any privacy, since everything gets posted online.
Argumentative/Discursive/Reflective

  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer’s opinion.
  • If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly presented in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
  • If reflective, the candidate must still take a stance for or against the topic. Personal feelings and emotions must be evident.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.5 Our age is not determined by the date on the calendar, but by the mind.
Argumentative/Discursive/Reflective

  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer’s opinion.
  • If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly presented in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
  • If reflective, the candidate must still take a stance for or against the topic. Personal feelings and emotions must be evident.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.6 Happiness is a choice.
Discursive/Argumentative/Reflective

  • If discursive, the arguments for and against must be well-balanced and clearly analysed in the essay. The candidate must provide supporting evidence for his/her arguments. The candidate may come to a particular conclusion at the end of the essay, which should include recommendations.
  • If argumentative, the essay must reflect a specific argument or viewpoint for or against the topic. The candidate should give a range of arguments to support and substantiate his/her view. The conclusion should be a strong, clear and convincing statement of the writer’s opinion.
  • If reflective, feelings and emotions must be evident.

NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay.
[50]
1.7 Interpretation of pictures
The candidate

  • should give the essay a suitable title.
  • may interpret the pictures in any way.
  • may choose to write any type of essay, provided it is in direct relation to the picture chosen.
  • may write in any appropriate tense.

1.7.1 Picture: A window

  • Literal interpretations: a view from a window, home environment.
  • Figurative interpretations: a window to the world, the world of opportunities, escape into a world of your own.
    [50]

1.7.2 Picture: A boy on shoulders

  • Literal interpretations: parent-child relationships, a delightful experience.
  • Figurative interpretations: caring, racial harmony, trust.
    [50]

TOTAL SECTION A: 50

SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 2
Instructions to Markers:

  • Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 30-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric:
    • Content, planning and format (18 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (12 marks)

NOTE: No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes penalties.
2.1 LETTER TO THE PRESS
A letter to the editor about road accidents

  • The letter should be addressed to the editor of a newspaper.
  • The letter should have an introduction, a body and a conclusion.
  • The tone and register of the letter should be formal.
  • Acceptable variations of the format must be allowed.
  • The following aspects of format should be included:
    • Address of sender
    • Date
    • Recipient (Editor)
    • Address of newspaper
    • Salutation
    • Subject line
    • Suitable ending
    • Signature
    • Name of sender
  • The following information should be included in the letter, among others:
  • Details of road accidents
  • Expression of views and feelings about the accidents
  • Suggestions about ways in which future road accidents may be avoided
    [30]

2.2 OBITUARY
An obituary of a teammate

  • The tone must be formal.
  • The following aspects of format should be included:
    • Full name of the deceased
    • Date of birth
    • Date of death
  • The following information may also be included:
    • Birthplace
    • Where the person was living at the time of death
    • Key survivors
    • Date, time and place of funeral
    • Biographical information
  • A tribute must be paid to the deceased.
    [30]

2.3 AGENDA AND MINUTES OF A MEETING
Minutes of a meeting

  • The language must be concise and formal.
  • Items must be numbered.
  • Headings and bullets may be used.
  • The minutes must be written in the past tense.
  • The following aspects of format should be included:
    • The name of the organisation
    • The date, time and place of the meeting
    • A list of people present as well as apologies tended
    • A record of discussions and decisions/actions taken
    • The time at which the meeting ended
  • The minutes must provide a summary of what was proposed and finally agreed upon.
    [30]

2.4 DIALOGUE
A conversation between a parent/guardian and a child

  • A context must be provided at the beginning of the dialogue.
    The dialogue must be between the parent/guardian and a child

The tone must be informal.

  • The child must convince the parent/guardian.
  • The following aspects of the dialogue format must be included:
    • The names of the speakers written on the left side of the page.
    • A colon used after the name of the character who is speaking.
    • A new line used to indicate each new speaker.
    • Where necessary, actions must be given in brackets before the words are spoken.
      [30]

TOTAL SECTION B: 30

SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 3
Instructions to Markers:

  • Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas.
  • Use the 20-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out in the attached rubric:
    • Content, planning and format (12 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (8 marks)
      NOTE: No additional penalties may be imposed as any deviations are addressed by the rubric.

3.1 FLYER
Sale of items

  • The following aspects should be included in the flyer, among others:
    • Eye-catching headline or slogan
    • Catchy words and phrases should be used.
    • Sufficient details of the items for sale
    • Your contact details
  • The language may be formal or informal but not slang or colloquial.
    NOTE: Do not award marks for illustrations.
    [20]

3.2 DIARY ENTRIES
The candidate’s feelings BEFORE and AFTER the first day at work

  • There MUST be TWO diary entries with two different dates/times.
  • The entries should express the candidate’s feelings before and after the first day of work.
  • The diary entries should be written in the first person.
  • The language should be simple and informal.
  • The tone must reflect emotions suited to the topic.
    [20]

3.3 DIRECTIONS
Directions to the hall

  • The directions may be in either point or paragraph form.
  • Complete sentences are not necessary.
  • Directions must be in the correct sequence, including reference to distance, turns and landmarks.

NOTE: Do not award marks for illustrations.
[20]

TOTAL SECTION C:20
GRAND TOTAL:100

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR ESSAY – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]

Criteria    Exceptional  Skilful  Moderate  Elementary  Inadequate 
CONTENT & PLANNING
(Response and ideas)
Organisation of ideas for planning;
Awareness of purpose, audience and context
30 MARKS  
Upper level  28–30  22–24  16–18  10–12  4–6
  • Outstanding/Striking response beyond normal expectations
  • Intelligent, thought-provoking and mature ideas
  • Exceptionally well organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion
  • Very well-crafted response
  • Fully relevant and interesting ideas with evidence of maturity
  • Very well organised and coherent, including
    introduction, body and conclusion
  • Satisfactory response -Ideas are reasonably coherent and convincing
  • Reasonably organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion
  • Inconsistently coherent response
  • Unclear ideas and unoriginal
  • Little evidence of organisation and coherence
  • Totally irrelevant response
  • Confused and unfocused ideas
  • Vague and repetitive
  • Unorganised and incoherent
Lower level  25–27  19–21 13–15  7–9 0–3 
  • Excellent response but lacks the exceptionally striking qualities of the outstanding essay
  • Mature and intelligent ideas
  • Skilfully organised and coherent, including introduction, body and conclusion 
  • Well-crafted response
  • Relevant and interesting ideas
  • Well organised and coherent, including
    introduction, body and conclusion 
  • Satisfactory response but some lapses in clarity
  • Ideas are fairly coherent and convincing
  • Some degree of organisation and coherence, including introduction, body and conclusion
  • Largely irrelevant response
  • Ideas tend to be disconnected and confusing
  • Hardly any evidence of organisation and coherence
  • No attempt to respond to the topicCompletely irrelevant and inappropriate
  • Unfocused and muddled
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING
Tone, register, style, vocabulary appropriate to purpose/effect and context;
Word choice;
Language use and conventions, punctuation, grammar, spelling
15 MARKS    
Upper level 14–15  11–12  8–9  5–6  0-3
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Exceptionally impressive use of language,
  • Compelling and rhetorically effective in tone
  • Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling
  • Very skilfully crafted
  •  Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Language is effective and a consistently appropriate tone is used
  • Largely error-free in grammar and spelling
  • Very well crafted
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Appropriate use of language to convey meaning
  • Rhetorical devices used to enhance content
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Very basic use of language
  • Diction is inappropriate
  • Very limited vocabulary
  • Language incomprehensible
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary not appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Vocabulary limitations so extreme as to make comprehension impossible
Lower level  13 10 7 4  
  • Language excellent and rhetorically effective in tone
  • Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling
  • Skilfully crafted 
  • Language engaging and generally effective
  • Appropriate and effective tone
  • Few errors in grammar and spelling
  • Well-crafted 
  • Adequate use of language with some inconsistencies
  • Tone generally appropriate and limited use of rhetorical devices
  • Inadequate use of language
  • Little or no variety in sentences
  • Exceptionally limited vocabulary
 
STRUCTURE
Features of text;
Paragraph development and sentence
construction
5 MARKS
  5 4 3 2 0-1
  • Excellent development of topic
  • Exceptional detail
  • Sentences, paragraphs exceptionally well-constructed
  • Logical development of details
  • Coherent
  • Sentences, paragraphs logical, varied
  • Relevant details developed
  • Sentences, paragraphs well-constructed
  • Essay still makes sense
  • Some valid points
  • Sentences and paragraphs faulty
  • Essay still makes some sense
  • Necessary point lacking
  • Sentences an paragraphs faulty
    • Essay lacks sense
MARK RANGE   43-50 33-40 23-30 13-20 0-10


ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]

Criteria  Exceptional  Skilful  Moderate  Elementary  Inadequate 
CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT
Response and ideas;
Organisation of ideas for planning;
Purpose, audience, features/conventions and context
18MARKS 
 15-18 11-14 8-10 5-7 0-4
  • Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
  • Intelligent and mature ideas
  • xtensive knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Writing maintains focus
  • Coherence in content and ideas
  • Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
  • Appropriate and accurate format
  • Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Maintains focus – no digressions
  • Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
  • Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies 
  • Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Not completely focused – some digressions
  • Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
  • Some details support the topic
  • Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
  • Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Some focus but writing digresses
  • Not always coherent in content and ideas Few details support the topic
  • Has vaguely applied necessary rules of format
  • Some critical oversights 
  • Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Meaning is obscure with major digressions
  • Not coherent in content and ideas
  • Very few details support the topic
  • Has not applied necessary rules of format
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING
Tone, register, style, purpose/effect, audience and context;
Language use and conventions;
Word choice;
Punctuation and spelling
12 MARKS  
 9–10  7–8  5–6 3–4   0–2
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Grammatically accurate and well-constructed
  • Virtually error-free 
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Generally grammatically accurate and well-constructed
  • Very good vocabulary
  • Mostly free of errors
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Some grammatical errors
  • Adequate vocabulary
  • Errors do not impede meaning
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
  • Limited vocabulary
  • Meaning obscured
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
  • Error-ridden and confused
    • Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
  • Meaning seriously impaired
MARK RANGE 25-30 19-23 14-17 9-12 0-7

 

ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]

Criteria  Exceptional  Skilful  Moderate  Elementary  Inadequate 
CONTENT, PLANNING & FORMAT
Response and ideas;
Organisation of ideas for planning;
Purpose, audience, features/conventions and context
12MARKS 
 10-12 8-9 6-7 4-5 0-3
  • Outstanding response beyond normal expectations
  • Intelligent and mature ideas
  • xtensive knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Writing maintains focus
  • Coherence in content and ideas
  • Highly elaborated and all details support the topic
  • Appropriate and accurate format
  • Very good response demonstrating good knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Maintains focus – no digressions
  • Coherent in content and ideas, very well elaborated and details support topic
  • Appropriate format with minor inaccuracies 
  • Adequate response demonstrating knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Not completely focused – some digressions
  • Reasonably coherent in content and ideas
  • Some details support the topic
  • Generally appropriate format but with some inaccuracies
  • Basic response demonstrating some knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Some focus but writing digresses
  • Not always coherent in content and ideas Few details support the topic
  • Has vaguely applied necessary rules of format
  • Some critical oversights 
  • Response reveals no knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Meaning is obscure with major digressions
  • Not coherent in content and ideas
  • Very few details support the topic
  • Has not applied necessary rules of format
LANGUAGE, STYLE & EDITING
Tone, register, style, purpose/effect, audience and context;
Language use and conventions;
Word choice;
Punctuation and spelling
8 MARKS  
 7-8 5-6 4 3  0–2
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary highly appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Grammatically accurate and well-constructed
  • Virtually error-free 
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary very appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Generally grammatically accurate and well-constructed
  • Very good vocabulary
  • Mostly free of errors
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Some grammatical errors
  • Adequate vocabulary
  • Errors do not impede meaning
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary less appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Inaccurate grammar with numerous errors
  • Limited vocabulary
  • Meaning obscured
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary do not correspond to purpose, audience and context
  • Error-ridden and confused
  • Vocabulary not suitable for purpose
    • Meaning seriously impaired
MARK RANGE 17-20 13-15 10-11 7-8 0-5
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